JPOP vs. Finnegan

JPOP vs. Finnegan

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by neens

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squid
Artist
421 comments
# 27   Posted: Jun 4 2008, 04:55 PM
Fence, I think it would have been possible to jump past the part with HT right into the fun stuff with Jpop and Finnegan. I don\'t know what really happened, but it seems like you kinda burned out after page 3.
The HT stuff works, I don\'t mean it\'s bad or whatever, but I do think it would have been possible to cut it out, and just have three pages of the two guys being awesome. Then maybe you could\'ve gotten it finished? I\'m just throwing it out there I guess.
This was still a lot of fun, though, like usual.:>

dogg--It\'s not really the markers that bother me, but the colors themselves seem sort of unfinished, like you could have done more with them. Maybe there is too much white.
But anyway it was totally cool and stuff.

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 26   Posted: Jun 3 2008, 11:45 AM
hahah i liked dawg\'s idea of scar but i just love fence\'s style so much. it was a hard one to call.

the only critique i had was for fence. hey. Finish! hahah

but seriously, i liked these a lot!

-J

neens
Approval Committee
266 comments
# 25   Posted: Jun 2 2008, 06:45 PM
thanks dudes, yea I\'m super sorry about being incomplete, my bad. I was closer this time at least, I guess.
also that was the coolest scar I could have had, it\'s almost sad to see it go ; ;

Phill
Artist
895 comments
# 24   Posted: May 31 2008, 10:54 AM
I thought both were good, granted there were some things I didn\'t like.


Dawg: Not bad man, not bad at all. The Jingles being beheaded in this story does look like something that would confuse people as to what you\'re plannin\', but I think nobody is really going to get confused so you\'re safe there mang. The only thing that really killed my vote was the use of markers on this. It just looks so messy and as much as I hate to say it... your digital colors are levels beyond this comic. The only problem with traditional colors is that you usually gotta make it look consistent, and with markers that\'s kinda hard to pull off, especially when some colors overlap and make parts darker, like the splotches on the pink flesh color you chose for J-Pop there.

I did like the story here, short and sweet, but also pretty funny, I think the \"Which scar does Finnegan get\" idea is a nice touch. I\'m voting for C personally.



Fence: STOP LEAVING COMICS UNFINISHED!! You really would of taken a commanding lead had you of finished you know. But regardless of that what you have here looks amazing! I really admire your style and the look of this comic overall. The only part that erked me was just seeing pencils. Oh well...

The story really stood out for me out of these two comics, I really thought the idea of J-Pop encountering somebody who actually annoys him is a great idea considering J-Pop would probably be the champ of annoying others ;3.




Dawg I\'m digging your story, but I think you gotta practice on traditional colors more seeing as how your BB right now is looking to be one of your better looking comics. Fence I\'m giving you my vote for creative story and it left me entertained but quality is marked down. Nice comics overall.

saintpio
Artist
71 comments
# 23   Posted: May 30 2008, 04:47 PM
They\'re both really good comics with cool scars. It was hard to vote on, but J-Pop got it for me for the complete work.

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 22   Posted: May 30 2008, 02:37 PM
Dawg-It\'s good to see you experiment with different coloring mediums but the marker really hurt you. Your digital stuff tends to be much stronger but the marker was appropriate for your style. The pages could also be a bit bigger because it was very difficult to read the text because it was very small on my monitor. But other than that I enjoyed the comic, I thought the scar was pretty neat and you had some nice things going on in your story.

Fence-Thems were some awesome Angie cameos, you draw her well. You always have such nice inks and it\'s a shame you were unable to finish. I hope that you\'re able to have better time management in the future since this has happened several times. You also had a fun story that I enjoyed, and I was still able to read it on the unfinished pages.

Good job both of you!

justarhymes
Artist
654 comments
# 21   Posted: May 30 2008, 01:03 PM
Hooks :3

Jackster
Artist
304 comments
# 20   Posted: May 30 2008, 01:00 PM
You know what this means if Finnegan wins.


........METAL HANDS FOR J-POP!

Helftan
Artist
68 comments
# 19   Posted: May 30 2008, 07:29 AM
Hey both of you guys did a good job
having a style and sticking too it is nice.


dawgmastas it really worked well the stuff where you
mixed digital coloring with non digital stuff that rarely works
in my mind.
Fence wonderfull inking and stylised drawings kinda downer you did not finish it
anywhom both of you great job!

neens
Approval Committee
266 comments
# 18   Posted: May 28 2008, 11:45 PM
good god I\'VE DONE IT AGAIN SORRY
uploaded though

Mister Kent
Artist
958 comments
# 17   Posted: May 28 2008, 11:16 PM
Countin\' down the minutes until this one

luniara
Artist
528 comments
# 16   Posted: May 22 2008, 05:37 AM
I Hear Jpop will lose by 2 points.

Or was that win?

Not suuuure!

GOOD LUCK!

Kuro
Artist
581 comments
# 15   Posted: May 10 2008, 11:16 PM
OH SNAP!
how did i miss this one?!

totally looking forward to this

-J

odd13
Artist
109 comments
# 14   Posted: May 8 2008, 08:08 PM
ohss...a scar fight.
this will be interesting

CrunchMcbuttsteak
Artist
129 comments
# 13   Posted: May 8 2008, 06:01 PM
Oh dawg, you smilein\' fool! <3

Monday
Artist
964 comments
# 12   Posted: May 8 2008, 08:51 AM
Jeez you kids are so violent these days.

squid
Artist
421 comments
# 11   Posted: May 8 2008, 07:28 AM
it can be moriors tiem naow? :D

Aluísio C. Santos
Artist
735 comments
# 10   Posted: May 8 2008, 06:50 AM
At last.

Rtv!
Artist
603 comments
# 9   Posted: May 8 2008, 05:28 AM
Be gentle.

Corny
Artist
217 comments
# 8   Posted: May 8 2008, 04:02 AM
It\'s time to d-d-d-d-d-SCAR

Mister Kent
Artist
958 comments
# 7   Posted: May 8 2008, 02:03 AM
Let\'s git a\'scarrin\'

Kozispoon
Artist
1211 comments
# 6   Posted: May 8 2008, 01:48 AM
Scars scars!! >:D

Holy crap I\'m excited! go Finnegan GO!

Red
Council
703 comments
# 5   Posted: May 7 2008, 09:17 PM
omg omg omg

Lazereyes
Artist
128 comments
# 4   Posted: May 7 2008, 09:08 PM
oh my word

justarhymes
Artist
654 comments
# 3   Posted: May 7 2008, 08:18 PM
>:D

neens
Approval Committee
266 comments
# 2   Posted: May 7 2008, 07:59 PM
oh geez oh man oh geez

Angie
Council
1937 comments
# 1   Posted: May 7 2008, 07:59 PM
I\'m afraid of what Dawg has in store

Comic Details -

 
Scar Match
Drawing Time: 3 weeks
Ended: Jun 6th, 2008
Votes Cast: 40
Page Views: 2793
Winner: neens
 

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