Please don\'t let me scare you away from doing 100% traditional.  Sometimes, it\'s the only way to go.  The look you were going for in this particular case (slick red and gray, with few colors in between?) might have been better suited for the exactness only a computer can give you, but TRADITIONAL ROCKS AND I LOVE IT.  

Please don\'t say \"never again.\"  ;_;  

haha well you live and learn Neko XD I really enjoyed what you had, I just wish that you would have given the backgrounds more love and attention since your figures are so solid

100% traditional work: Never again.

They were two prisma and one copic. Which is like working with crayola markers that bleed more, I\'m ashamed but at the same time, learned a lot.

Okay, I can\'t get past this:  did you color this with two Crayola markers??  It doesn\'t look very clean, I think your digital coloring is a lot more successful.    

Other than that, it was great.  Short and sweet, definitely makes me want to see the battle.  

This was terrifically concise.  This is the kind of short and too the point battle I hope to one day master.  Speaking of my own stuff, I\'m using markers and was really worried about comparing it to digital coloring.  This comic\'s put me quite at ease.  Besides the simple (and appealing) use of grey and red, the brush strokes are visible but don\'t take away from the aesthetic.
Good job.

Nice traditional work here. It was a bit uneventful (though it\'s just a prologue so I guess it doesn\'t have to be), but the story flowed very well. I love Angie in your style, she looks so cute and innocent haha.

Short sweet and just enough to pique our interest for your upcoming battle. I love what you two are doing with this idea- it makes the battle seem epic

While your faces and people are slick, You can definitely get more from detailing backgrounds/ inanimate objects with varying line widths. Composition wise everything is aces and negative space is pretty air tight

I swear Scarlet looks like she has the Sharingan eye from Naruto. =P

I like the idea of a prolouge before a big fight. Let\'s just hope it\'s worth it when the fight comes up.

hehehe i loved how you drew Angie; she\'s so cute XD the coloring looked smooth too, and i liked it <3
can\'t wait to see what happens next! =]

I really like your pacing in this Krissy. Its comfortable to read.

There are only a couple of things I would have changed. The perspective on the building on the 3rd page is too squashed, so it looks really sharp. Sketch a thumbnail for your buildings at half the size and then blow it up to the size you want it to be, print it out and trace. Your perspective is most likely to be correct if you draw it at a smaller size first for some crazy reason. On the last page it would have been cool if you added a panel that more clearly included both scarlet and angela and the alley they were in. I\'m all about the establishinggg  

I would have liked to see another 10 pages of this!!!!  

Well, I\'m going to go with Slade here, it was kind of... \'Oh, is that... all?\' HOWEVER, I want to say that I was really interested in the style that you did it in. The clean-ness and the use of the vivid red was interesting. (Making her eyes red threw me, however. XD ) I liked the perspective shot on page 3... I still suck horribly at those. Nice there.

My only other issue would be your hands. Page 1 and page 4 had some pretty... wonky hands. I think you could focus a little more on them to make them consistent.

Lookin\' forward to the match!

I agree with ya slade, I really found my entry didn\'t add anything. But it was a two sides of the same story idea me and angie had. If anything, this is more of a skill/\"lets find out where i am now\" thing.

nice start, though a bit run of the mill. (then again, who am i to talk)
but you both did a good job at setting the stage. looking forward to the next chapter. :3

till next...

Thats an interesitng idea there, kinda like amping up the stakes of an epic battle thats about to come. Very smart thinking Neko, now i want to see what\'ll happen : )

Its a prologue gaiz

no, i think its 2 beyond battles set to be done at the same time
in which case 1 actual battle will be held after

...come a what?

Are we separating battles nao? :I