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Dr. Fabulous vs. Finnegan
Critiques & Comments
# 21
Posted:
May 5 2013, 02:13 PM
# 20
Posted:
Dec 23 2007, 11:25 AM
Eric: You know how much I loved your part. Anyone who knows Mighty Max\'s awesomeness wins my daughter\'s hand. You\'ve always been great at comedy, so of course this battle was epic. Seeing how this is your first battle, which only gave you one week to draw, this was done very well, quality wise. However;
People have already told you this, but you really need to understand your own pace. This was your first battle, which means you should\'ve equipped yourself with more cushion of time so you can impress the viewers a lot more. Also with your perspectives , I think you have a good grasp of the basics, but I think you still need little more practice (try a ruler sometimes) and learn how to clean up your lines.
Overall, Dr. Fabulous was fabulous. Good job, and I can\'t wait to see more from you (especially your homotastic BB).
Fence:Okay, I know you haven\'t finished this battle, but your ending made it all the worth while. That was, honestly, the best ending for an unfinished comic. But still, once you were getting to the good parts it broke my heart when I realized this comic was not finished so, maybe next time, right?
People have already told you this, but you really need to understand your own pace. This was your first battle, which means you should\'ve equipped yourself with more cushion of time so you can impress the viewers a lot more. Also with your perspectives , I think you have a good grasp of the basics, but I think you still need little more practice (try a ruler sometimes) and learn how to clean up your lines.
Overall, Dr. Fabulous was fabulous. Good job, and I can\'t wait to see more from you (especially your homotastic BB).
Fence:Okay, I know you haven\'t finished this battle, but your ending made it all the worth while. That was, honestly, the best ending for an unfinished comic. But still, once you were getting to the good parts it broke my heart when I realized this comic was not finished so, maybe next time, right?
# 19
Posted:
Dec 22 2007, 12:52 PM
I don\'t know what the hell to sssaaayyyy. so i\'m just wasting space, saying RANDOM things in order to just past the time. the DOCTER was very funny and his story had FUCKING peaked my interest. the was HILAROUS at the end when he teleported, i didn\'t think anyone remembered mighty max, but I liked that show, it WAS fucking cool. PERIOD SYMBOL
# 18
Posted:
Dec 18 2007, 11:50 PM
Rofl-I pretty much told you what I thought on AIM
Fence-dammit, you should have finished. My only problem was the perspective and anatomy was ALL wrong on the last page. I mean what the crap Fence?!
Fence-dammit, you should have finished. My only problem was the perspective and anatomy was ALL wrong on the last page. I mean what the crap Fence?!
# 17
Posted:
Dec 17 2007, 04:29 PM
Both were funny, but you two would of benefited from more time.
Fence: I liked what you did with the black and whites, however the sudden cut to colors kinda seemed a bit strange to me. I did like the colors though, but I think you should of colored the first couple of pages instead. I\'m sorry to see that you didn\'t finish, but hey, you did a fair amount of pages for a week, 5 finished pages (I don\'t care if 2 weren\'t colored, they looked finished) and a good amount of laughs as well.
The photographed page was pretty funny as well, however I read from left to right instead of what you originally intended (Left row first, then right row of pictures) if anything I think you could of stacked all those images vertically or horizontally instead cause it got a bit confusing. Anywho, you\'ve got 3 months to rest up and to practice some awesome things for comics, come back with something awesome will ya?
RoflQu: Nice job on your first fight dude, however I\'m with dawg on this, you gotta give yourself more time on a void battle, otherwise you\'ll have to rush your inks and not everything will look consistent. Your battle was very funny dude, and I loved the mighty Max reference, however the shifting page sizes were a bit strange to look at from time to time.
But really, overall this is a nice first comic you\'ve shown us, but let\'s try out a 2 or 3 week fight next battle, you\'d really benefit from having some extra time.
Rofl, keep fighting like this and strive to become better. Fence, rest up and sharpen your pen handling skills, I know you both will be a force to be reckoned with in the future. Vote goes to RoflQu
Fence: I liked what you did with the black and whites, however the sudden cut to colors kinda seemed a bit strange to me. I did like the colors though, but I think you should of colored the first couple of pages instead. I\'m sorry to see that you didn\'t finish, but hey, you did a fair amount of pages for a week, 5 finished pages (I don\'t care if 2 weren\'t colored, they looked finished) and a good amount of laughs as well.
The photographed page was pretty funny as well, however I read from left to right instead of what you originally intended (Left row first, then right row of pictures) if anything I think you could of stacked all those images vertically or horizontally instead cause it got a bit confusing. Anywho, you\'ve got 3 months to rest up and to practice some awesome things for comics, come back with something awesome will ya?
RoflQu: Nice job on your first fight dude, however I\'m with dawg on this, you gotta give yourself more time on a void battle, otherwise you\'ll have to rush your inks and not everything will look consistent. Your battle was very funny dude, and I loved the mighty Max reference, however the shifting page sizes were a bit strange to look at from time to time.
But really, overall this is a nice first comic you\'ve shown us, but let\'s try out a 2 or 3 week fight next battle, you\'d really benefit from having some extra time.
Rofl, keep fighting like this and strive to become better. Fence, rest up and sharpen your pen handling skills, I know you both will be a force to be reckoned with in the future. Vote goes to RoflQu
# 16
Posted:
Dec 17 2007, 12:05 PM
Raffles - Do some longer drawing times before you try doing one weekers. It was a bit rushed, and I wasn\'t too sure what was happening in parts, but it had a Mighty Max reference, so you win.
Fence - If you were gonna go the cheap route and sneak a fight in, you should have at least finished it. The first 3 and a half pages are awesome and stuffs.. You shouldn\'t have stacked them though.
Fence - If you were gonna go the cheap route and sneak a fight in, you should have at least finished it. The first 3 and a half pages are awesome and stuffs.. You shouldn\'t have stacked them though.
# 15
Posted:
Dec 17 2007, 10:15 AM
THis was the funniest battle ever
# 14
Posted:
Dec 17 2007, 08:17 AM
Hahaha! Fence your lazy ending was awesome. Yeah, I wish you had finished the comic, but way to save it.
roflq-- The first thing that hit me was your scale. First panel, that kid looks too tiny. Size the kid up with the fence and you can see it... Then page five, the first appearance of the Constable, same problem. Then the other thing I noticed, page 6, it doesn\'t really look like the guys are running.. in cartoons, when a character\'s running, his feet are often drawn off the ground.. more like what you\'ve got in the third panel.
But besides all that, you had some great jokes. I liked how you drew Esquellio, hehe. And I liked your ending as well.
I look foreward to more comics from both you guys.
roflq-- The first thing that hit me was your scale. First panel, that kid looks too tiny. Size the kid up with the fence and you can see it... Then page five, the first appearance of the Constable, same problem. Then the other thing I noticed, page 6, it doesn\'t really look like the guys are running.. in cartoons, when a character\'s running, his feet are often drawn off the ground.. more like what you\'ve got in the third panel.
But besides all that, you had some great jokes. I liked how you drew Esquellio, hehe. And I liked your ending as well.
I look foreward to more comics from both you guys.
# 13
Posted:
Dec 14 2007, 11:57 PM
uploaded!
..sorry I feel like I\'m letting everyone down again ; ;
but this was a terrible week to be doing a battle, as it was the last week of finals. but! I get a nice long break with finnegan\'s retirement. so I will be back! with finished stuff! in three months!!
..sorry I feel like I\'m letting everyone down again ; ;
but this was a terrible week to be doing a battle, as it was the last week of finals. but! I get a nice long break with finnegan\'s retirement. so I will be back! with finished stuff! in three months!!
# 12
Posted:
Dec 14 2007, 11:04 PM
Also, I apologize for the shoddy quality at some points. School and outside factors led this to be not as finished and pretty as I\'d like.
# 11
Posted:
Dec 13 2007, 10:21 PM
Alright people, we\'re in and posted for your reading pleasure. Wei, sent the pages in case of any issues.
# 10
Posted:
Dec 9 2007, 03:09 PM
This is going to be more hard core than gay sex.
# 9
Posted:
Dec 8 2007, 06:15 PM
Marvelous
# 8
Posted:
Dec 8 2007, 02:42 PM
HOMO BUTTSEX
Goodluck you two, love you very much.
Goodluck you two, love you very much.
# 7
Posted:
Dec 8 2007, 09:33 AM
Not fabulous, FANTABULOUS!
# 6
Posted:
Dec 8 2007, 08:47 AM
It\'s about forking TIME, Rof. Make this battle FABULOUS.
Or I\'ll eat your face off.
Or I\'ll eat your face off.
# 5
Posted:
Dec 8 2007, 05:32 AM
Watch out, Finnegan, don\'t go to Wonderland with him!!!
# 4
Posted:
Dec 8 2007, 02:31 AM
Rofl, it took you a year to join, I hope a week long battle doesn\'t kill ya! ;3
Fence, show the new guy the ropes!
Good luck you two!
Fence, show the new guy the ropes!
Good luck you two!
# 3
Posted:
Dec 7 2007, 08:24 PM
CLASH OF THE TITANS
# 2
Posted:
Dec 7 2007, 08:19 PM
BLOW MY MIND ALREADY BITCH!!
# 1
Posted:
Dec 7 2007, 08:06 PM
WATCH OUT MOTHERFUCKERS.
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Dec 24th, 2007
Votes Cast:
36
Page Views:
2112
Winner:
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