Both were pretty short-and-sweet, but I have to give it to Kura X for finishing.
And, um, Kura, I\'ve always based my drawings of Void City on San Fran. >.>
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# 10
Posted:
Dec 21 2007, 05:26 PM
# 9
Posted:
Dec 21 2007, 04:27 PM
graph, It looked like there was a good story going there. Sorry you didn\'t finish :< Guess I have to wait for the beyond battle. Although, for such a short drawing time, maybe you should have done a short vignette, like Kura did, instead of this, which looks like it was going to be a longer story with more than one scene. But I dunno. I\'ve never done a two week battle o_O
Kura, I liked the premise but it felt that the story took a back seat to the jokes. The jokes themselves could have been good, but I don\'t think the execution did them justice... it felt like they were just tossed in there. I know they\'re supposed to be irrelevant, but I found it kind of hard to follow the comic when there we jokes that hadnothing to do with the story being tossed everywhere. Maybe you could have left a few of them out or made some of them more relevant to the story?
Kura, I liked the premise but it felt that the story took a back seat to the jokes. The jokes themselves could have been good, but I don\'t think the execution did them justice... it felt like they were just tossed in there. I know they\'re supposed to be irrelevant, but I found it kind of hard to follow the comic when there we jokes that hadnothing to do with the story being tossed everywhere. Maybe you could have left a few of them out or made some of them more relevant to the story?
# 8
Posted:
Dec 21 2007, 03:57 PM
i can easily say my least favorite page is page 5...i couldnt figue out a proper ending and ran with the first thing i could come up with.
Graph, sory about calling you out on such short notice. i look forward to seeing the rest of it.
Graph, sory about calling you out on such short notice. i look forward to seeing the rest of it.
# 7
Posted:
Dec 20 2007, 11:52 PM
Uploaded, but incomplete story. I\'m going with the Beyond Battle route for this one as there were a few ideas I liked.
# 6
Posted:
Dec 20 2007, 12:14 PM
*brushes off rust*
last 12 hour. how nostalgic
last 12 hour. how nostalgic
# 5
Posted:
Dec 16 2007, 09:53 PM
Fever hit after finals. I don\'t think I can make it with what I originally planned. I\'ll get as much as I can done.
# 4
Posted:
Dec 9 2007, 01:00 PM
YES PLZ MOAR LOL
# 3
Posted:
Dec 6 2007, 03:00 PM
Yeah, dont dissapoint Graph too!
# 2
Posted:
Dec 6 2007, 12:43 AM
theres no way im ending this year by slacking off
# 1
Posted:
Dec 6 2007, 12:42 AM
C\'mon Graph! Time to get back into the game! Kura, good to see you fighting again.
Comic Details
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
2 weeks
Ended:
Dec 28th, 2007
Votes Cast:
27
Page Views:
1798
Winner:
Majikura
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I liked the jokes in Kura\'s side alot. I\'m a big fan of corny jokes so stuff like the \"I\" shot made me laugh.