Vs. Athos / Robosockmonkey

Vs. Athos — Robosockmonkey

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# 4   Posted: Dec 12 2007, 12:40 AM
The battle as a whole seemed pretty comfortable for you, nothing really pushing your skills or limits. I think you probably could have won if you submitted, but I\'d like to see you stretch in terms of drawing backgrounds and details. I really liked the lighting effects, especially in the drop down scene. I dunno if the black backgrounds worked for mood purposes throughout the whole fight though.

# 3   Posted: Dec 5 2007, 01:34 PM
I\'m fine with the lack of backgrounds as it makes sense even if it is lazy XD Now I do feel as if your heart wasn\'t in this, there\'s not much in the way of build up and it ends extremely abruptly. I think for future battles you should work on pushing yourself more storywise. The inks are lovely, I just want there to be a story back there to make me want to keep reading.

# 2   Posted: Dec 4 2007, 09:27 PM
Lack of background gives a mood, but you could scrible some stalagnits or something in the back too. All recent battles have this grim mood - maybe it\'s because the big gun is still mourning his friend.
I like the idea that robomonkey dosn\'t know what to do now. I think he needs a real death match again, but I don\'t know if anybody is up for such challange :P

# 1   Posted: Dec 4 2007, 09:27 PM
not bad, wish it had made it into the battle x_x... still ...looks like you \"Started\" a story.. i want more <3 ...

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Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Dec 11th, 2007
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