Mecid: Your comics have been, and always will be, the most amusing reads on this site -in my opinion- and it\'s not \'cause NB is part of the Good Guys, it\'s \'cause your timing and sense of humor are just perfect. I swear, your stories crack me up every time and are always a blast to read- and as always, I love your style. It\'s thick and bold, but not stiff. Very much fun all around and omg I love Nowhere Boy. ;3; Poor lanky bastard.
Sandpuppeteer: I personally thought this one was a little lacking story wise. I love your art and style, but it just seemed kinda... empty all around. The dialog was so-so and the fight felt very forced. Crawford\'s power is a little vague, but I still look forward to seeing what you do with it. In all- it was still a decent battle, just not up to par with what I\'ve seen you pull off in the past. :3
Thanks for the amusing fight you two, this was awesome. <3
Nowhere Boy vs. Crawford
Critiques & Comments
# 20
Posted:
Oct 19 2007, 03:27 AM
# 19
Posted:
Oct 18 2007, 04:18 PM
mecid: XD -insert face here- I do so love the humor in this comic. Crawford in the punch panel on page 9 seems a little stiff but I think Nowhere Boy\'s crumpled position makes up for it all the way. Wish it was all colored but you can\'t have everything. Very nice inking there. Backgrounds are great. Story-line is very entertaining. Excellent work.
sandpuppeteer: Pretty sweet coloring here. The tone it sets really matches Crawford\'s attitude. I thought it was a little strange that both their hair was the exact same shade of orange. . . but that\'s just nitpicking. I felt the story was a bit bland, but Crawford\'s new power picks up the slack. I really must say I can\'t think of anything else to criticize.
Fabulous comics you two.
sandpuppeteer: Pretty sweet coloring here. The tone it sets really matches Crawford\'s attitude. I thought it was a little strange that both their hair was the exact same shade of orange. . . but that\'s just nitpicking. I felt the story was a bit bland, but Crawford\'s new power picks up the slack. I really must say I can\'t think of anything else to criticize.
Fabulous comics you two.
# 18
Posted:
Oct 17 2007, 06:49 AM
i really didn\'t find anything wrong with either (but then again i suck at critique, so don\'t trust me XDDD )
# 17
Posted:
Oct 16 2007, 06:58 PM
WTF People?! 30 votes, as of this moment and just one has commented! Tell me how I can improve! What I did wrong! Anything! BAH!
# 16
Posted:
Oct 14 2007, 08:06 PM
Very good, from both of you!
Mecid: I love your battles. I think your backgrounds and perspective shots are just absolutely fantastic. <3 Your dialog was really hella fun, though I did notice a few typos here and there. (Our=/=Out) I wish you had been able to color it all, as the color pages were great. All in all, I enjoyed the match.
Sandy: I really am overly fond of Crawford, you do realize that, right? He\'s just... such a grumpy bear... <3 I loved the washed out water-color-ish coloring... but I HATED the hard-to-read washed out text bubbles and text. Aside from a few errors in the bubble direction, their placement was also a little odd. I think the only other suggestion would be to perhaps vary up your panels a bit to make it more.. interesting to the eye.
All in all... Fun! <3
Mecid: I love your battles. I think your backgrounds and perspective shots are just absolutely fantastic. <3 Your dialog was really hella fun, though I did notice a few typos here and there. (Our=/=Out) I wish you had been able to color it all, as the color pages were great. All in all, I enjoyed the match.
Sandy: I really am overly fond of Crawford, you do realize that, right? He\'s just... such a grumpy bear... <3 I loved the washed out water-color-ish coloring... but I HATED the hard-to-read washed out text bubbles and text. Aside from a few errors in the bubble direction, their placement was also a little odd. I think the only other suggestion would be to perhaps vary up your panels a bit to make it more.. interesting to the eye.
All in all... Fun! <3
# 15
Posted:
Oct 14 2007, 06:43 PM
Correction: Page 3, panel 6. The second text bubble should be said by Nowhere Boy, NOT Crawford.
# 14
Posted:
Oct 14 2007, 04:16 PM
nevermind, bet the both of you will do good
# 13
Posted:
Oct 13 2007, 10:29 PM
Uploaded. Though only three pages colored cause I\'m the slowest colorist in the world. I\'ve been spoiled by the unlimited time provided by beyond battles.
# 12
Posted:
Oct 13 2007, 09:21 PM
I\'m sure it will get more once it\'s posted. Speaking of which, uploaded earlier than I thought! Huzzah! No last minute rush for me!
# 11
Posted:
Oct 13 2007, 07:11 AM
i agree with Hiemie! \'^\'
GO GO GO!!! yes! less than a day to go! 8D
make this good guys <3
GO GO GO!!! yes! less than a day to go! 8D
make this good guys <3
# 10
Posted:
Oct 13 2007, 01:39 AM
This fight needs more attention.
# 9
Posted:
Oct 1 2007, 08:35 PM
Sweet! I\'d forgotten I had a scanner tucked away in a box! We\'re back on schedule!
# 8
Posted:
Sep 29 2007, 05:04 PM
WAIT. I forgot to comment on this? I\'m a retard.
I DOTH DECLARE THIS TO BE SEXY!
I DOTH DECLARE THIS TO BE SEXY!
# 7
Posted:
Sep 29 2007, 10:33 AM
Well, if I can\'t get my scanner to work, I may have to forfeit.
# 6
Posted:
Sep 20 2007, 12:09 AM
NOWHERE BOOOOOOOYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY~
*swoon*
*drops panties* Whoops.
*swoon*
*drops panties* Whoops.
# 5
Posted:
Sep 16 2007, 03:55 PM
BATTLE OF THE GINGER KIDS!!!
# 4
Posted:
Sep 16 2007, 03:16 PM
MAYBE MAYBE MAYBE MAYBE MAYBE
# 3
Posted:
Sep 16 2007, 02:35 PM
YES YES YES YES YES
# 2
Posted:
Sep 15 2007, 09:35 PM
yaay more Crawford! <3
# 1
Posted:
Sep 15 2007, 07:21 PM
Sweeet... more grumpy bear goodness! 
Comic Details
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
4 weeks
Ended:
Oct 21st, 2007
Votes Cast:
43
Page Views:
1448
Winner:
mecid
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Mecid, I love trendy bat and emo walrus. those assholes. um some figures/poses look awkward, but damn you got backgrounds nailed, I\'m jealous. those buildings and perspective waaugh amazingg. those coloured pages were pretty sharp too, props on those. ps is that a tiny finn cameo? :3
Sand, your colours were pretty as well, but again some awkward looking figures in a few places. the semi transparent speech bubbles prolly weren\'t the best choice, but I had no trouble reading them myself. the story left a little to be desired, but now I\'m curious about Crawford\'s powers, ooh aah!