Zsa... your thumbs... y-you switched their outfits...(IT\'S ADORABLE) <8\'D Anyway, AAAHH MAN, you are brilliant, the toning in your side is to die for and so are your action scenes (*0* Also...\"Hairy Freak\"  *DIE LAUGHING* XDD Very wicked comic to read (*w*

It\'s okay to not draw Juu to scale (I\'m really bad at it so it\'s not a surprize that you didn\'t notice). I\'m sorry that I also changed some things around in my side than from what I told you in email (*__*;;;

And heyhey, if you ever need help with dialogue, just ask and I will assist.

Thank you for the crits, Monday and Ariboooo m(_ _)m I really appreciate them. (and am not against Delanna and Juu meeting again in the future...!)

Wowwwww... this wasn\'t what I was expecting at all...  

Awesome job, you two... I\'ll do a real crit when I screw my head back on...

oh wow, i really enjoyed these both!

zabreuser: i hella loved the action panels; they were clear and easy to follow (and the decapetated head was a plus! XD ) I didn\'t get tired or bored with the text either =] overall, it kicked ass!

Kumaru: your whole style is appealing to me and i loved how you did the hatches without making it look crowded or messy! i relished your action panels too! they moved real smoothly! it was love~!

NICE ONE YOU GUYS!

Wow \\o_o/. First of all, thanks for the battle, Kumaru This was really fun to concept and draw! BTW we need to go pchat more sometime! Your fight is totally super, I like read it seven times, being 6 of them in a row, and just love it, your renditions of Delanna are even better than mine =O. I specially like the \"nice shot!\" panel (actually I loved as about all your panels !_!). I hope I have gotten to your expectations, at least

Something I hadn\'t noticed when I drawed the things and just thought of it now was about your last page, like, I had ever read his size, really @_@ He\'s totally smaller than I thought, sorry about that =\'\\

On more time, thanks again for accepting the challenge even when you already had another on the making! :\'D

Kure: Thanks, I see what is your point and totally agree, I\'m in fact not an english native speaker, even though I had some knowledge of english, it\'s being a bit tough to concept the baloons, but I\'ll certainly take at least 3 times more effort on that on my next time.

Monday: Sup waging hearts in the trophy match I\'m totally lost as for what I\'m going to do with Delanna\'s future, though

I\'m really grateful for the feedback, and hope to get more as well

Both these battles were razor sharp yo !

ZsaZsa \'s pacing was ace that decapitation scene was really clear and vivid in my mind ! However his goons look similar to each but i still got what was happening ! Color was subtle sue,but you can really feel it despite monochromes. Page 3 rocked this, and page 5 used full color sections mixed with monochromes and it doesn\'t look discordant at all yo. This part was very adorable, as I was introduced to Delanna and her metal string powers in a pickle surprise sort of way. Why am I talking to Zsa in third person *flump

Kukukukuuumaruu - You\'re quite the fight machine lately have you ? thanks to the both of you my morning was thoroughly ruined with awesome battles ! Your fight might get the point for being very well done and having little fault at all ! Let me explain; your face and body expressions are very controlled and full of expression. You pull off a rich lighthearted theme and a well paced quirky battle. Though a few parts had me reading back and forth but I defintiely understood in the end. You pulled off Del\'s attitude well in this one no doubt

However in the end both these entries were similar for the most part no ? I got my action fix and now I\'m doubly thirsty for some story. I hope this could be a start to Delanna\'s shennanigans and the hairy love affair that is to follow (maybe not :<)

I enjpyed both these comics alot, the only crit i have is with zsabreuser \'s dialogue, it was like a bad fan translation of a manga. I dunno if english is your first language or anythingbut it might be a good idea to have someone proof read your stuff to make sure it makes sense.
Other than that your fight was bitching and your panelling and pace was excellent
Kumaru i jsut dig your stuff anywyas

Uploaded... Z, I\'m not okay, but thanks for asking...

10 hours 42 minutes D:

Hmm.. .battle uploaded.

Kumaru \\o\\ ARE U OK??!

I so finished already! I\'ll make the thumbs and then upload.. Do I have to send the thumbs separately?

WOOT, two weeks already @_@.. gone.

WOW got a pair of killers here
kumas on fiiiyaaah

eee D: good luck Kumaru

you too Zsabreuser

wth! XD we\'ll revive you if you die man! woooT

Oh wow. You\'re going to tackle two comics at once, Kumaru? I hope it goes well for you.

Looking forward to your character\'s first match, zsabre.

This will totally rock! Prepare for total fullness of winning! @_@

I AM GOING TO DIE!! LET\'S GO!