Big improvement on the last one Z3RO! Nicely played lad  : T

first pages were good Zero, kinda got lazy at the end but, still the jumping panels were pretty nice, little more curves to the girl wouldnt hurt but, thats just me... hehe

jira..cant really comment here..

wow Z3RO you did a great job, better then i was hoping. Your colors was great i really liked the moon sense that was amazing.

Blackfiredragon i wish i could see all of your comic but it stared pretty good, man you should draw it out then color it at the end of your time, but you must have ben busy. good job

man I wish the first comic had been finished, quility wise the panels that were actually finished looked amazing.
The arke comic was really strong story wise good art as well.

No problem yo Yeah I wanna know what happened with your story. From what I can see it looked liked it was pretty interesting

Thanks ryu, haha there\'s more background\'s cos I didnt waste my time like in my first battle. Learnt my lesson there :/

Dude Z3Ro that was epic, I really have to finish the rest of mine soon now, just to repay you for the sheer coolness you put into yours!

black: I wish you could\'ve finished you comic, or at least put in some text. But, life\'s life.

z3ro: I want to commend you on a good fight, and I see you put in a lot more backgrounds this time. I enjoyed reading your comic very much.

Oh yeah, just in case anyones confused, my story picks up from my intro pages

Heh, I had similar problems being swamped with work dude, but I mananged to get most of it done (had to be cheap with the last 3 pages). Upside is, I think I\'m starting to get a bit more used to this now.  
Anyways cant wait to see what u got for me blackfiredragon

Well I want to apologize to Z3RO and everyone else. I ended up getting swamped by a whole bunch\'O school finals and crap. Which is accompanied by AP English\'s wave of essays comparable to a biblical flood.  So while I had the chance I wanted to submit what I had. Cant wait to see your end dude, and I should be able to post the finished version of mine sometime in the near future. Till then, back to work for me.  

Z3RO man your frist battle you lost but do you think you win this time? well man i hope it\'s good man, me i was thinking that your frist one was good but please put detail or a little bit more detail, i think that\'s what killed you in your frist one man well that a little wisdom that you might not use, but something tell me that it might be better then what i\'m thinkg dude.

O, one loss make up for it

O, one loss make up for it

this is going to be a amazing battle... Good Luck, Z3RO and Blackfiredragon i\'ll enjoy this battle for real

Likewise man,time to get the rust outta my drawin hand.

Right, let\'s try this again. Best of luck to ya Jira