Great work gentlemen. The story similarities on Void latley will really shape this city in an interesting place.
-Gee
I love the opening, the cover\'s red highlighted text. Simple detail, but it really sets the reader in a state of expectancy. I like the little detail on AB\'s shoe to display how he\'s feeling. That goofy walk and face expression also very animated. Great start with the blowjob, pretty daring for a new guy, but if that\'s Lang\'s thing possibilities are endless.
Good introduction of Tod too, his expression really shows annoyance and AB even MORE annoyed by Tod blowing his fun. \"I\'ve got psychic powers and an imagination, what do you got?\" fukking hilarious what happens next followed by Tod\'s response after seeing AB\'s large golgotha. On page 5 panel three has an attack that looks rather simplified for your style, i suggest a different angle or some more speedlines. Other than that, the fight only got better when everything started exloding and cops got attacked. Cool finishing move on the robot too. Your fights have some way of being memorable, i suggest a continueous story.
-EuE
Good first fight with Tod. I like certain angles you chose to use,
like the on one page two where Tod jumps in the air. Those elbow smashes are also pretty dynamic. I like the simplified keyframe motion of the muay thai king on page 2 panel 10.
The Sphere of Death panel also contained a nice distorted angle. I\'m curious to see what you\'ll come up with next, ao much power and no money...that\'s one interesting ironic bum. lol
Keep it up guys!
Asian Bloke vs. Tod
Critiques & Comments
# 35
Posted:
Oct 23 2006, 07:16 PM
# 34
Posted:
Oct 22 2006, 05:15 AM
Thanks Tien!
# 33
Posted:
Oct 21 2006, 08:10 PM
great battle to both of you! Asian Bloke takes it in my opinion. wooo, AB!
# 32
Posted:
Oct 19 2006, 06:42 PM
Thanks for clarifying that, Shortfury! ^_^
# 31
Posted:
Oct 19 2006, 04:23 PM
Eullogy - Its not about who wins the fight in the comic its about which comic is better. Which comic drew you in more... Which comic had better story, humor, art etc. It doesn\'t even have to include a fight between the characters.
Its all about makin the best comics you can make not just playin streetfighter =P
Its all about makin the best comics you can make not just playin streetfighter =P
# 30
Posted:
Oct 19 2006, 03:46 AM
Alleyway sex, can\'t live without it.
I can\'t believe I missed this battle, two of my favourite newcommers up against eachother;
Asian Bloke\'s pages are truely of a great quality, and the cliché asian stuff in it really makes it complete, I love you guys.
I can\'t believe I missed this battle, two of my favourite newcommers up against eachother;
Asian Bloke\'s pages are truely of a great quality, and the cliché asian stuff in it really makes it complete, I love you guys.
# 29
Posted:
Oct 18 2006, 06:14 PM
Eullogy- The point of my comic was to make these two as mates at the end of the day. Y\'see, Tod is a powerful mofo, he turned a whole street into pieces of rubble, but yet A.B, survived it. So that shows that A.B can still dodge Tod\'s moves. As for the VCPD interruption, why wouldn\'t they get involved? They are the law of the city and to see such massive destruction at a quiet alleway, anyone would\'ve called the police. I mean, you did realised, that Tod, did the Hobo-ken...And as for who wins what? It does NOT matter. If you look at others comics, the story could easily started as two fighters being in the same team. No one has to die or lose. As long as both fighters are actually involved in the comic, it\'s all good. But, if you really like to know, I was trying to portray Tod to be grateful, because, A.B actually DID saved him from the cyborg and in the comic, A.B does not care if he won the fight or not. The whole thing was just an unfortunate event. He never expected any of these to happen. He only wanted his headjob... >_<
From the start, I wanted to make the story to be very, unexpected. From one little thing, it turned out to be such a disaterous next scenes.
So, hope that clears something\'s out.
Peace,
Gee.
From the start, I wanted to make the story to be very, unexpected. From one little thing, it turned out to be such a disaterous next scenes.
So, hope that clears something\'s out.
Peace,
Gee.
# 28
Posted:
Oct 18 2006, 03:02 PM
hmm yes.. I did make it short.. and I probably should have made the \"will beat you for food\" panel larger.. hell the whole intro could have been a page or two. And I\'m sure I could have definitely made the fight much longer...
Gee- few crits: loved yer tod.. (also the random car and cats flying through the air) the police interuption was unneccessary(or could have been worked in a bit more), and because of it, bloke didn\'t actual \"beat\" tod in your comic (so technically if bloke wins.. he, doesn\'t win?). It drives me up the wall when fighters go at it but there is no clear winner, physically or otherwise. and later tod is all \"whoa im grateful, wee inner monologue\", about blokes cyborg kicky explosion(which was cool), but a couple pages before tod punched like half a city block of concrete to rubble like it was nothing (inconsistent in character attitude and/or power curve). which could be fixed.. like a bigger cyborg, or more guns, tod gets wounded, MORE cyborgs, etc..
other than that stuff.. I fucking LOVED it..
Gee- few crits: loved yer tod.. (also the random car and cats flying through the air) the police interuption was unneccessary(or could have been worked in a bit more), and because of it, bloke didn\'t actual \"beat\" tod in your comic (so technically if bloke wins.. he, doesn\'t win?). It drives me up the wall when fighters go at it but there is no clear winner, physically or otherwise. and later tod is all \"whoa im grateful, wee inner monologue\", about blokes cyborg kicky explosion(which was cool), but a couple pages before tod punched like half a city block of concrete to rubble like it was nothing (inconsistent in character attitude and/or power curve). which could be fixed.. like a bigger cyborg, or more guns, tod gets wounded, MORE cyborgs, etc..
other than that stuff.. I fucking LOVED it..
# 27
Posted:
Oct 18 2006, 02:01 PM
Nice comics, both of you
Gee: Cool fight, and your shading is really nice. I find it really considerate that you put a warning on the first page about the nudity -- some people might not be comfortable with that kind of thing, and many artists on Void don\'t give any warning about it in their fights.
Eullogy: Short and to the point! I would have liked to see a longer fight scene, but your art is great.
Gee: Cool fight, and your shading is really nice. I find it really considerate that you put a warning on the first page about the nudity -- some people might not be comfortable with that kind of thing, and many artists on Void don\'t give any warning about it in their fights.
Eullogy: Short and to the point! I would have liked to see a longer fight scene, but your art is great.
# 26
Posted:
Oct 17 2006, 09:11 PM
Ahahah, that was awesome. I love both of your boys styles and stories, hehe.
Ima - Killer comic, consistent and full of delicous kickin\' and awesome expression, that was really cool.
Eu - Ahah, thank you for the SOAD lyrics, that was cute. I..love Tod. That\'s it. Haha, sick comic and I like the angles you had going, I just wish there had been moooree.
Ima - Killer comic, consistent and full of delicous kickin\' and awesome expression, that was really cool.
Eu - Ahah, thank you for the SOAD lyrics, that was cute. I..love Tod. That\'s it. Haha, sick comic and I like the angles you had going, I just wish there had been moooree.
# 25
Posted:
Oct 17 2006, 08:54 PM
Hahah! good job, Eullogy! The end part is kinda similAr to mine....food! ^_^ I also like the way you draw A.B, especially as The KING. Enjoyed it, bro! Well done!
# 24
Posted:
Oct 14 2006, 08:45 PM
The gloves are sooo off! >:]
# 23
Posted:
Oct 14 2006, 12:40 AM
\"form Toast\" should totally be a formating option for documents or a programming language or something
# 22
Posted:
Oct 13 2006, 11:18 PM
Huh? No man, not trying to insult you...I just don\'t really know who\'s who yet...but now I realised that Toast is a council >_<. I\'m still kinda nooby here...
# 21
Posted:
Oct 13 2006, 09:12 PM
says the person with the alternating CAPS in his user name
# 20
Posted:
Oct 13 2006, 08:34 PM
@_@ \'form Toast\'?
# 19
Posted:
Oct 13 2006, 05:40 PM
more upload problems....I have all the files...but it will require some behind the scenes fiddling form Toast.....so there will be a delay
# 18
Posted:
Oct 12 2006, 07:33 PM
What The!? How did you know!? @_@
# 17
Posted:
Oct 12 2006, 05:13 AM
uploaded! begin with the battle for food and entertainment!
# 16
Posted:
Oct 12 2006, 12:53 AM
Oh Wei, Just in case you\'re reading this, I sent you my battle to your e-mail. Because it could not upload. So yeh, just let me know if you got it. Thank you. Gee.
# 15
Posted:
Oct 12 2006, 12:22 AM
Can\'t wait to see your side of the battle Eullogy dude!
# 14
Posted:
Oct 10 2006, 07:09 AM
Tom Yum Goong VS Hobo Kombat!! Go! Go! Go!
Wow, i think i just lost my mind there. D:
Wow, i think i just lost my mind there. D:
# 13
Posted:
Oct 4 2006, 09:29 PM
Mmmmhhhh...Sammich....!
# 12
Posted:
Oct 4 2006, 02:02 PM
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO PSYCHIC HOBO.
DO IT FER THE SAMMICHES
DO IT FER THE SAMMICHES
# 11
Posted:
Oct 3 2006, 07:27 AM
Whoopie! Five more pages to go!
# 10
Posted:
Oct 2 2006, 07:40 PM
:3 yay late replyin\'.
You\'re welcome mr. !On xD
You\'re welcome mr. !On xD
# 9
Posted:
Oct 1 2006, 11:39 PM
Yey! I\'ll make sure you\'ll enjoy this one too, Sixtem!
Gee.
Gee.
# 8
Posted:
Oct 1 2006, 11:10 PM
YES YES YES YES YES YES! Asian Bloke didn\'t capture my interest-- until I read his comics! I can\'t wait for another.
And it took Eullogy enough damn time to get in. D:< But I can\'t wait for his stuff, either!
And it took Eullogy enough damn time to get in. D:< But I can\'t wait for his stuff, either!
# 7
Posted:
Oct 1 2006, 07:27 PM
Sounds good...oh, and thanks for accepting man!
# 6
Posted:
Oct 1 2006, 03:27 PM
pretty good.. but I think I need more kicking.. and pizza..
# 5
Posted:
Oct 1 2006, 07:15 AM
How\'s your battle coming along, mate?
# 4
Posted:
Sep 28 2006, 07:09 PM
Hey, thanks for the support Typo! Yeh, me too, Tod, don\'t hold back! Because I won\'t...I guess that\'s how we do it In Void City...go hard or Go home! XD
# 3
Posted:
Sep 28 2006, 06:59 PM
yayyy! A.B\'s in another fight! *Cheerleads*
:3 i wana see what the newguy does too.. this\'ll be pretty cool *nodnod*
:3 i wana see what the newguy does too.. this\'ll be pretty cool *nodnod*
# 2
Posted:
Sep 28 2006, 06:37 PM
Thanks Bro! Heh, I actually challenged Mooo after I didn\'t get a reply from you, Tod. But what the hey, maybe I\'ll fight Mooo after...
# 1
Posted:
Sep 28 2006, 04:31 PM
New guy lookin\' pretty goddamn interesting. Welcome to Void. Good luck!
Lang my mang, show me the science of eight limbs.
Muay thai!
Lang my mang, show me the science of eight limbs.
Muay thai!
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
2 weeks
Ended:
Oct 24th, 2006
Votes Cast:
46
Page Views:
1296
Winner:
ImaGEEnat!On
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