Izzy, with a little more effort for the art I would probably say you were the winner - but seriously there\'s hardly any detail, hardly any shading, just a very bland looking comic. The story was very entertaining up until the final page though. Pretty good entry.
Yosai, excellent art as always. You had an engaging story, this was an interesting comic. The ending was especially interesting, leaving on a hook ~ and the broadcast cutting in and out was also excellent for setting a mood to this.
This battle was probably the best of the first round, both comics were very entertaining.
Queen of VOID 2006: Round 1 / Aixa vs. Orange
Critiques & Comments
# 14
Posted:
Sep 13 2006, 05:38 PM
# 13
Posted:
Sep 12 2006, 09:56 PM
i gotta give my vote to izzy, yours felt more like a comic to me. yosais was totally pretty, but it was way too sporadic and unconnected for me to really get into. you could pretty fucking awesome layouts though, keep pushing that.
.....plus i love how izzy draws tits.
.....plus i love how izzy draws tits.
# 12
Posted:
Sep 12 2006, 01:47 PM
Oh gosh! these are both wonderful!! I can\'t see anything bad!! Awsome work you two!
# 11
Posted:
Sep 12 2006, 09:48 AM
I definitely think that the first round goes to you both....these are both very interesting and entertaining comics
# 10
Posted:
Sep 12 2006, 01:52 AM
yosai took the quality department for me easily... but started to lose it a bit with the creativity. what really lost me though was everything after the first explosion(?). things happened, but nothing felt connected... then that last part... what was that about? ...maybe it\'s just me and i missed something, i don\'t know.
izzy, the end was a bit anticlimactic, but overall, i\'d say you did a great job... though panels 4 and 5 could have used a bit more speedlines or some blur or something. i knew it was moving, but only after going through the next few panels or so...
overall, i loved both. yosai came in with a strong start, but was a bit too cryptic, and izzy had some solid fun, but could have opened a bit better and the close needed a touch of work...
but then i\'m a noob, so talk all this yammering with a grain of salt...
till next...
izzy, the end was a bit anticlimactic, but overall, i\'d say you did a great job... though panels 4 and 5 could have used a bit more speedlines or some blur or something. i knew it was moving, but only after going through the next few panels or so...
overall, i loved both. yosai came in with a strong start, but was a bit too cryptic, and izzy had some solid fun, but could have opened a bit better and the close needed a touch of work...
but then i\'m a noob, so talk all this yammering with a grain of salt...
till next...
# 9
Posted:
Sep 11 2006, 10:55 PM
*walks out from the darkness*
finally a battle I\'ve been waiting for...
and I\'ll keep my comments short, since I\'m a lazy person
Izzy:
great battle, nice sequences, and funny
your comic is clean and easy to understand
*love that part where Orange is disturbed by the slime*
good job ^^b
Yosai:
and again, I\'m never tired of your art quality, the mood the color the everything
but somehow all of that mixed into one comic.. it\'s kinda hard to understand the story...
but still, it has a strong... strong... *lost of word*
so yeah you get it okay? great job d^^b
okay that\'s few from me, I\'m going back to the darkness
finally a battle I\'ve been waiting for...
and I\'ll keep my comments short, since I\'m a lazy person
Izzy:
great battle, nice sequences, and funny
your comic is clean and easy to understand
*love that part where Orange is disturbed by the slime*
good job ^^b
Yosai:
and again, I\'m never tired of your art quality, the mood the color the everything
but somehow all of that mixed into one comic.. it\'s kinda hard to understand the story...
but still, it has a strong... strong... *lost of word*
so yeah you get it okay? great job d^^b
okay that\'s few from me, I\'m going back to the darkness
# 8
Posted:
Sep 11 2006, 12:49 PM
if you sufffer any damage to your eyes by looking at my entry i apologize in advance
# 7
Posted:
Sep 6 2006, 08:12 PM
teeheeheeeheeeheeheehee
# 6
Posted:
Sep 2 2006, 01:53 PM
this is going to be epic.
# 5
Posted:
Sep 1 2006, 09:27 PM
A blonde and a red-head walk into a bar..
# 4
Posted:
Sep 1 2006, 10:16 AM
Rocket boobs!
# 3
Posted:
Aug 31 2006, 01:25 PM
yeah go Izzy PSTP is probably not watching this but whatever!
Good luck all
Good luck all
# 2
Posted:
Aug 26 2006, 01:29 PM
This is the battle I\'m most looking forward to out of this first round.
# 1
Posted:
Aug 26 2006, 10:01 AM
Oh shnap! ... This ... will be... sweet...
Tournament Match
Drawing Time:
2 weeks
Ended:
Sep 18th, 2006
Votes Cast:
66
Page Views:
1692
Winner:
Yosai
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