Heheh, Dawgmastas, you made me giggle. I liked your colors too. I would use less-transparent painting though. Looks messy with the lines.
Cyrine, yours was okay, but I hated the font. bad idea to use Times New Roman in a comic. Try a font from blambot.com.
Jingles vs. Ms.Moppit
Critiques & Comments
# 42
Posted:
Oct 1 2006, 01:13 PM
# 41
Posted:
Sep 29 2006, 10:57 AM
jesus, jingles is fantastic.
# 40
Posted:
Sep 27 2006, 06:57 PM
Dawg, I really hate the way this is colored, otherwise your art was awesome. I laughed a lot in front of chinese kids at the library, this was one of the most entertaining battles up on void in a while.
Cyrine, the art was pretty decent, the little coloring that was there wasn\'t really great though, so overall I put you about on par with Dawg artwise. The story was entertaining, but just not quite entertaining enough compared to your competition.
Both were pretty good.
Cyrine, the art was pretty decent, the little coloring that was there wasn\'t really great though, so overall I put you about on par with Dawg artwise. The story was entertaining, but just not quite entertaining enough compared to your competition.
Both were pretty good.
# 39
Posted:
Sep 27 2006, 04:03 PM
heyyyy!!! i think i\'m in love with Ms.Moppit style hahhaha is great.. very manga, very unic... using the whole page to shape the history... and .... and.... i dont know what to say..
love your art.
love your art.
# 38
Posted:
Sep 27 2006, 01:54 PM
AHAHAHAHAHA! These are BOTH great!!!
You\'re both getting the same score from me cause I love them both!
You\'re both getting the same score from me cause I love them both!
# 37
Posted:
Sep 27 2006, 11:18 AM
I simply cannot vote on this. I love them both. They win together in my eyes.
You both? Thank you for making me laugh all day long. <3
You both? Thank you for making me laugh all day long. <3
# 36
Posted:
Sep 27 2006, 10:17 AM
I gave my vote to Dawg solely based on Esquellio\'s line about the fish.
# 35
Posted:
Sep 27 2006, 12:19 AM
FUCKIN FISH!! Both of these were super awesome. GLEE.
# 34
Posted:
Sep 26 2006, 10:58 PM
Thanks for the comments everyone
I hope you all enjoy the comic~
I hope you all enjoy the comic~
# 33
Posted:
Sep 26 2006, 10:31 PM
You both cracked me up with your battles and both were pretty much oozing with personality. Quality wise I gave the vote to dawg because cyrine\'s pages were pretty random with being colored. Entertainment wise I went for cyrine, while dawg\'s was very entertaining I enjoyed cyrine\'s a bit more. The last panel with the lucky kitty crying was a nice touch.
# 32
Posted:
Sep 26 2006, 09:37 PM
MONEY SHOT!
Awesome comics! This is going to be a tough vote for me...
Awesome comics! This is going to be a tough vote for me...
# 31
Posted:
Sep 26 2006, 09:10 PM
posting IN AN EPIC BATTLE
# 30
Posted:
Sep 26 2006, 07:50 PM
FACE
# 29
Posted:
Sep 26 2006, 07:18 PM
To join, just ask, to become an enemy, just write it into your story.
# 28
Posted:
Sep 26 2006, 07:11 PM
Whoa...man, this was a tough one to vote on...in the end, your scores were really close.
Cyrine: Man, I really love your style. Those perfectly clean lines and crazy expressions have won my heart. Your story was nice and simple with a cute sense of humor...it semmed well thought out and complete.
Dawg: First off, I love Jingles. He\'s eccentric and hairy, and that spells win in my book. Your story wasn\'t quite on par with Cyrine\'s art-wise, but you definitely landed the higher entertainment score. Just about every page got a laugh out of me.
Now...how does one join and/or make enemies of the repatriates?
Cyrine: Man, I really love your style. Those perfectly clean lines and crazy expressions have won my heart. Your story was nice and simple with a cute sense of humor...it semmed well thought out and complete.
Dawg: First off, I love Jingles. He\'s eccentric and hairy, and that spells win in my book. Your story wasn\'t quite on par with Cyrine\'s art-wise, but you definitely landed the higher entertainment score. Just about every page got a laugh out of me.
Now...how does one join and/or make enemies of the repatriates?
# 27
Posted:
Sep 26 2006, 11:29 AM
LOAD damn you! I need to seeeeee....
# 26
Posted:
Sep 26 2006, 12:14 AM
Submitted with 7 mins to spare XD *wipes sweat off brow*
Thanks so much for the extension Wei
I\'ve been so busy with studying sorrie for the delay everyone.
Thanks so much for the extension Wei
I\'ve been so busy with studying sorrie for the delay everyone.
# 25
Posted:
Sep 25 2006, 01:22 PM
Oh god the world will end in 10 hrs.
# 24
Posted:
Sep 25 2006, 01:21 PM
T-minus 10 Hours!!!!!!!!!!!! I wanna see the submissions soooooooooooooo bad!!!!
# 23
Posted:
Sep 25 2006, 12:45 AM
Yesssss.....
# 22
Posted:
Sep 20 2006, 08:11 PM
Well, I\'m uploaded. Holla.
# 21
Posted:
Sep 16 2006, 10:12 PM
cyrine has requested an extension and as per the new rules...both artists receive one....deadline moved forward.....one week
# 20
Posted:
Sep 14 2006, 08:56 PM
Oh man, just five more days. This better be awesome, you two.
# 19
Posted:
Sep 11 2006, 09:24 AM
This is going to be so awesome haha
# 18
Posted:
Sep 5 2006, 10:00 PM
OH GOD WHY
# 17
Posted:
Sep 3 2006, 07:45 PM
need to start working on comic with mr.puddy kat!
*chuckles GMAT study book out the window* jk... *goes to retrieve them*
*chuckles GMAT study book out the window* jk... *goes to retrieve them*
# 16
Posted:
Sep 3 2006, 05:39 PM
I\'m turned on..... times 2. Keep up the arousal you two!
# 15
Posted:
Sep 1 2006, 05:16 PM
!!! This shall be veeery IINTERESTINGS!
XD Don\'t EITHER of you let us down!
XD Don\'t EITHER of you let us down!
# 14
Posted:
Aug 28 2006, 08:43 AM
there better be some mackin\' on that spider. BETTER BE.
# 13
Posted:
Aug 28 2006, 01:46 AM
Oohohoohohohohohoohohohohohoho.
# 12
Posted:
Aug 27 2006, 08:52 PM
This is going to be downright hilarious...
# 11
Posted:
Aug 26 2006, 10:46 PM
I like both these fighters, but Jingles is just too damn creepy. Even when compared to Ms Moppit. Scary, isn\'t it? Should be an interesting match, though. Good luck, both.
# 10
Posted:
Aug 24 2006, 05:25 PM
I rooting for Jingles too.
# 9
Posted:
Aug 24 2006, 02:01 PM
*ENTHUSIASM!*
# 8
Posted:
Aug 23 2006, 04:12 PM
Sweet mother of god....the orphen children are crying right now...D:>
# 7
Posted:
Aug 23 2006, 02:25 PM
I have been yearning for a Jingles match ever since he got in.
And Ms. Moppit just rocks. SO, YAY!
And Ms. Moppit just rocks. SO, YAY!
# 6
Posted:
Aug 23 2006, 02:31 AM
III think its awesome
high five!
high five!
# 5
Posted:
Aug 22 2006, 03:33 PM
I\'M rooting for JINGLES!
# 4
Posted:
Aug 22 2006, 02:23 PM
C\'mon, guys. I can\'t be the only one who thinks this is awesome. And I /do/ think this will be completely awesome.
I don\'t really know who to root for...
I don\'t really know who to root for...
# 3
Posted:
Aug 22 2006, 02:10 PM
*lmao* @ Monday
Kitties and Spiders should live in harmony!
Kitties and Spiders should live in harmony!
# 2
Posted:
Aug 21 2006, 09:56 PM
I cried when this wasn\'t a deathmatch.
# 1
Posted:
Aug 21 2006, 08:15 PM
This should be....interesting.
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
4 weeks
Ended:
Oct 3rd, 2006
Votes Cast:
55
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1759
Winner:
cyrine
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Cy, your style makes me happy. I love the drawing of Jingles leaping for the string.
Damn, both halves were kickass; I\'m having a hard time choosing.