I voted, gave Ravist a point more because I\'m a sucker for philosophical spiels, plus his hand writing was a bit more legible.  Both of you did good, I look forward to more from both of you (and maybe a fight with me someday

wow.. its still dead even. somebody vote!

Ravist, Your art was better than Craqued\'s, but I marked you down for all the panels in which you\'re obviously hiding people\'s hands to avoid drawing them. That one shot where Colt is looking down on the puppies looks like he\'s about to pee on them because of the position of his arms. The story didn\'t do much for me, but I still liked you showing off Diego\'s philosophical streak.

Craqued, a lot of the time I couldn\'t read you lettering because it was so small. Weird, fun story, though. Good work. I gave you the win by a point, but now it looks like the score is TIED! Cool!

:DD Looks like I owe everyone an apology as well. I\'M SORRY (in a good way.)

Nah, you made him more in character than I did; I just showed his nasty side, whereas you showed both.

A-ha, great on the pidgin, because at first, I was like, \'what the..? you like beef?\' And now I\'ve got the lingo down. Shazzam.

Niiiiice, killa comic Ravigirl, it was so funny. Colt\'s lingo was SO spot on it was awesome and I love your paneling style, so fancy. I tried to make my simple and funny and but I think I made Diego too nice and lenient but then Colt has that effect of people. Yea, it was so much fun making my first real thought out mini comic, I need to learn how to panel things though so they flow (and I hope that WHISTLE is recognizable at the end, I rushed it, ugh). And yes MAHALO MUCH for the awesomely fun battle.

And I\'M SORRY YOU ALL SUFFERED THROUGH MY HORRIBLE HAND WRITING.

I\' just a simple Hawaiian, after all. Haha, thanks for the comments toooo, I hope for more battles in the future from you Ravi.

both comics were a bit hard to follow.....and the text was terrible   XD;
but either way, i enjoyed the art from both. not bad for a first fight (aside from the text), leaves lots of room for improvement for future ones.

You both need to work on making your handwriting readable.  Either that or start doing it digitaly.

D-ang, Craque! Your stuff was /off/ the hook, just wonderful. You definitely drew diego brilliantly, and the storyline was great. :3

Probably more organized than mine. :/ I /really/ need to learn to manage my time better, because my story was going to go in a /pretty different/ direction than how I did, and I had to cut out some action scenes (ei, very very last page) and a few pages that I didn\'t get time to ink because I procrastinated far too long; I was going to pack in a lot more evida+colt time in the last few pages, but you know, you know. ): Anyways, nice inks you did, and we\'ll see how this rolls. Peace.

Here\'s an update to match: Looks like I\'m going to be cutting it close, but I\'ll manage. Still have a few more pages to ink, but I\'ll pull it out of my hat overnight. Peace.

Alright submitted. And I think I\'ll say sorry bras, one more time.

That writing is gonna hurt.

Hey guys, I\'m submitting this tonight because I\'ll be leaving to visit some friends. I hope you burddas and sistahs like it, I tried my best with my limited comic smarts and my even worse inking skills. Can\'t wait to see what you got Ravi.

OH and hopefully my sense of humor comes through, its gonna be wierd for most of you if you don\'t know any local Hawaiians, but hopefully you\'ll find Colt\'s syntax funny (if you wanna know what he\' saying, there\'s a link to a Hawaiian slang [\"pidgin\"] site on his bio. Anyway, aloha oi~

now, let\'s see what you two are made of in battle!
can\'t wait to see this one  ;3

Prepare the air raid sirens it\'s a DOGFIGHT

...INTRIGUING *strokes beard*

GO COLT&EVIDA. GOGOGO.

my dog can eat your dog <3

DOG FIGHT!

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHH! +_=;

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHH! +_=;