Pi, the POW! in panel 4 doesn\'t really work that well. It would transition panel 3 to 5 better if you had slide winding up in a previous panel.

Timo, Creamy Orlando reminds me of Valentino Rossi.
http://www.freewebtown.com/sportbikeuk/rossicd/2004/Valentino%20Rossi%20Jacarepagua%202-4%2007%202004%2015.jpg

both of these looked pretty unfinished, but seeing as it\'s only a weeks drawing time that can be understandable. I wasn\'t  too impressed story wise for either of these. Timo\'s got my vote because it had a little more in each area.

sorry if that came off harsh

wait untill the next round baby!


all i\'m saying.

I mean the massive boner death

that would have been funny

At least timo had an ending. Although he should have died from having a massive boner !!! Messy and laaazy work from you, but im sure you enjoyed the beach!

Pi is that a blur effect at the end of your fight or is the image not loading properly. If its a blur then I suggest avoiding them forever. Keep practicing your line work, and try to get some basic perspective down so you can start drawing in some backgrounds. Its hard to crank out so many pages when your basics are still in the air, so I commend you on your efforts. Keep drawing at all times!!!

That would have been funny

I don\'t think either battle stood out as the winner.  I scored them both pretty low.  One will go on but if this is the amount of effort that we can expect to see then I don\'t seeing the winner getting very far.  

Sorry if that sounds harsh.

JV

Somehow, some way, Timo makes white-space-text-endings acceptable to read.

Pi: I honestly think I wasted time reading this comic. Seriously. There was little to no representation of what Timo\'s character should be, and of all plots to run, a \"tournament\" fight? Not only that, the quality wasn\'t up to game as your current fights get.

Timo: I do have my complaints about deathmatches not having \'deaths\' in them, but I give you the vote on all three scores. Your lines had more attitude and style behind them, and I could really feel the characters better in this one, despite the blunt-humor ending.

I was a little dissapoinbted that there wasn\'t a clear death in either fight, Pi sort of but not completly.  Anyways...

Why is Timmy so old in your fight Timo? That\'s all, both were pretty cool and interesting takes on each other\'s characters.

i suck!

pretty good pi, expecially for all the problems you were having in your regular life.

pi another awesome entry by you,,,this one and your gabo fight... i went with yours cuase it was more entertaining. and you did good. keep it up

timo. i love your style soo much but it lacked a fight even if there was no death. the ending was blah dint care much for it. he could have died of a heart attack hhahaha some people die of heart attacks after taking to many viagra(i heard on the news)...that would had been ok.
you got my quality vote but thats the most of it.

awesome job the both of yous.

Why is Timmy so old?

Funny comic, Timo, I wish there was some death...

i don\'t like to kill people.


it\'s against my religion.

I see no death, Timo. D:

... um... yeah. interesting... timo... that was a wrong ending... (adding to a list of things i really didn\'t need to know: 133,543,276; \'slide is gay for creamy\')

nice work both of you.

i have no real exscuse other than i was at the beach with my girlfriend.


and it was worth it.

Ah well, I didn\'t get it as finished as I would have liked. I lost a lot of time starting on a new job, which I got back from last night about 1-2 hours after deadline. I hope everything got submitted okay, I would\'ve kept working and re-submitting last night, but some shit got stirred up in the family, and I wasn\'t able to continue. That said, I still hope you like it, I think I got Carpel-Tunnel from all the rush drawing I did this weekend, in my very little free time.

GOD HELP ME I TRIED.


at least the last page is pretty funny.

i started on this wayyyy too late.

BUT I WILL TROOP ON

Only four more days.... get moving NO DEFAULTS!!!

Pi, I better see a WIN from you.

Full of creamy goodness.