zaffeus vs. Kubo

zaffeus vs. Kubo

by zaffe

54.7%
1190 points
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by kubo

45.3%
984 points
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(Pi)
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# 19   Posted: Jul 5 2006, 04:39 PM
Pretty good stuff from both sides, although it seemed pretty obvious that kubo\'s was extremely rushed. I\'ve seen you do better, man, so keep it in mind for next time. Zaffe, yours was very cool, lots of good action and all that, just gotta throw in some backgrounds and establishing shots when you can.

Votes to Zaffe.

BlueBandanaJake
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# 18   Posted: Jul 3 2006, 04:07 PM
You guys both did very well. Zaffe\'s story really got me interested, it was well written (dispite a couple of grammatical errors here and there) and the action shots were very nice! The crisp line art was very very good as well, good job.

Kubo, good job getting the whole thing colored, points to you there. The action shots seemed a little...eh, stiff I think is the word...and I think the pacing might have been a little too fast, so you might wanna work on that a bit.

Good work you two, now get some sleep (some more sleep if you\'ve already had some by now!)
*swig*

zaffe
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30 comments
# 17   Posted: Jul 3 2006, 02:02 PM
Yes, im truly sorry that the language sucks in my comic.
I usaly let my entrys run through a person with english as his/hers native language before i submit, but it wasn\'t time for it this time sence I finished up an hour or so before the deadline ended.
and myself had been up 2days straight to add to my already bad Linguistic Skills.

But tanks for all the comments, i\'m thrilled you all liked it, even though the dialog errors

ESG
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# 16   Posted: Jul 2 2006, 11:50 PM
you\'re  = you are.  your = belongs to you.  thought = an idea on your mind.  though = the word you were looking for. hear = ability to listen. here = current location. I don\'t usually nit pick but, what the hell guys. You created such beautiful art, but neither of you took the time to just carefully re-read over what you typed?

Wyvern
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# 15   Posted: Jul 2 2006, 11:40 AM
Zaffe - good fight man, well paced, consistent in the artwork, and well rounded over all.  Good show.

Kubo - not bad buddeh, but I think you can do better.  The whole thing screamed of \'rushed\' and \'I drew this while watching the Incredibles\'.  ;p  Good for you to colour it, but seriously, spend more time on your linework and bgs and it\'ll make a big difference.

PsychoCaptain
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# 14   Posted: Jul 2 2006, 11:26 AM
Zaffe: Great battle! It was nice to get to see a little of the more dark side of Zaffeus. The story was solid and well executed. Nice job!

Kubo: Allso a good battle. I can tell you had some great idears for the fight but the final result is a little boring. Nice colors.

Pepper JAQ
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212 comments
# 13   Posted: Jul 2 2006, 04:32 AM
nice work, the both of you!

MaxximumMATT
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# 12   Posted: Jul 1 2006, 11:42 PM
Judging this battle was made so much easier by the fact that they have pretty much the exact same story line. and by \'pretty much\' i mean \'exactly\'. so it\'s just a matter of who executed it better.
..and i\'d have to say that was zaffe. It was better paced, the characters and story development was more defined and the art was cleaner and tighter. Don\'t get me wrong.. Kubo did a smashing job and i\'m impressed that the whole thing was in color. His art and story telling was good.. but i had to give it to Zaffe on this one.

ColonelXonik
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# 11   Posted: Jul 1 2006, 11:21 PM
Zaffe, you drew this fight really well, but some of the action looked really stilted (as was the case with Kubo\'s piece). Also, you need to clean up some of your grammar and spelling.

Kubo...nice debut! I\'d concentrate on cleaning up the art some and refining your storyline.

zaffe
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30 comments
# 10   Posted: Jun 29 2006, 10:43 PM
Submitted with 1hour and 23min to spare...
I had to cut the storyboard shorter to get this done in time, so yeah, i appoegize for that.
But i still hope ya\'ll enjoy it, I\'ve pulled two allnighters in a row to get this done in time.
I really hope i didnt make a mayor foult in it or sommin, im really tired right now.
I was planing on using the last hour to add highlights on the cover art, but I neeed sleep.
well that\'s all i guess,
nighty

Wei Ingnan
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597 comments
# 9   Posted: Jun 21 2006, 08:18 PM
both artists have purchased an extension....deadline moved forward

BlueBandanaJake
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83 comments
# 8   Posted: Jun 21 2006, 04:46 PM
Damn, more wait? No problem, I\'ll be waitin! Make this awesome!

Wei Ingnan
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597 comments
# 7   Posted: Jun 20 2006, 12:49 PM
Kubo has purchased an extension...one week

DelBarrio
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426 comments
# 6   Posted: Jun 4 2006, 05:03 PM
Hooooot stuff right \'ere.  .0.

PsychoCaptain
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36 comments
# 5   Posted: Jun 2 2006, 07:45 PM
Really lookign forward to this!
 Go for it both of you. Make your oponents cry for mercy!

kubo
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38 comments
# 4   Posted: Jun 1 2006, 05:44 PM
I should be thanking you, bro. This one\'s going to be fun :D

Ronin Inc
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102 comments
# 3   Posted: Jun 1 2006, 11:52 AM
Yea this ones gonna be noice. Cant wait ^-^

zaffe
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30 comments
# 2   Posted: Jun 1 2006, 08:16 AM
thx for the match kubo

Colussus
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93 comments
# 1   Posted: Jun 1 2006, 07:47 AM
<3 Good luck to you both!

Comic Details -

 
Drawing Time: 3 weeks
Ended: Jul 7th, 2006
Votes Cast: 46
Page Views: 625
Winner: zaffe

 

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