WHERFISH god that was awesome, story wise this is the best from you so far. I wished it was finishe,d oh god. Now I have a higher expectation from you . Storywise you win over Mr. Sat, but quality wise.. sorry
Mr.: cool! I like how simplistic it was, and you finished your entries. It made me smile, but I feel it still lacks something- the overall feeling makes me feel like there\'s something left to be desired but I cannot point my finger on it...
eitherway, nice.
Deadmeat vs. Joe, The Zombie
Critiques & Comments
# 42
Posted:
Jun 13 2006, 04:06 AM
# 41
Posted:
Jun 13 2006, 03:58 AM
thanks guys, glad you were entertained. and yeah, i apologize for the unfinished quality. if i ever finish it(which i want to do) i will post it on the forums.
nice battle saturday! you deserve the win, i thought you would get it. HIGH FIVE!
nice battle saturday! you deserve the win, i thought you would get it. HIGH FIVE!
# 40
Posted:
Jun 11 2006, 04:50 PM
Fish, the first time I read this, I really disliked it. But on a second read I looked past the horribly unfinished art and saw the awesome story for what it was. I\'d venture to say the plot was more entertaining than Mr. Saturday\'s...I would\'ve loved to see this get the proper inking treatment. I\'d especially love to see Pye (great cameo, by the by) getting eaten.
Mr. Saturday, the story was really cute if cliched at times, but you threw in some really creative little details that made it unique. I loved the art, and your nice little response to everyone\'s calls for a romantic story was well-done. Great debut, and you get the win from me.
Mr. Saturday, the story was really cute if cliched at times, but you threw in some really creative little details that made it unique. I loved the art, and your nice little response to everyone\'s calls for a romantic story was well-done. Great debut, and you get the win from me.
# 39
Posted:
Jun 11 2006, 09:57 AM
I have to say, I really enjoyed both battles.
Saturday\'s side was cute and, ofcourse, more finished, but I enjoyed piraticalfish\' side more eventhough it was so sketchy, the script and such was very amusing.
I hope to see a more finished Deadmeat comic and a more creative Zombie Joe comic next time.
Saturday\'s side was cute and, ofcourse, more finished, but I enjoyed piraticalfish\' side more eventhough it was so sketchy, the script and such was very amusing.
I hope to see a more finished Deadmeat comic and a more creative Zombie Joe comic next time.
# 38
Posted:
Jun 10 2006, 01:25 AM
Deadmeat\'s battle was funny and confusing at the same time. :B I liked it, though~ the unfinished art was still alright and mostly easy to follow. Nice!
Joe\'s battle was cute~ the art, story, entertainment- very cute. XD Haha, I diggit. Also, very nice! I enjoyed this battle a lot.
Joe\'s battle was cute~ the art, story, entertainment- very cute. XD Haha, I diggit. Also, very nice! I enjoyed this battle a lot.
# 37
Posted:
Jun 10 2006, 01:21 AM
Wow piratical fish! To be put blunty, your art was unfinished and sucked a whole bunch - but your story was MORE than entertaining enough to make up for it!
Oh Mr. Saturday - a good solid entry for your first battle, good entertainment decent artwork too, a bit too gray but whatever.
Oh Mr. Saturday - a good solid entry for your first battle, good entertainment decent artwork too, a bit too gray but whatever.
# 36
Posted:
Jun 10 2006, 01:08 AM
http://entervoid.com/forums/index.php?act=ST&f=6&t=7368&st=0#entry101930
for people who dont enjoy copy and paste
all the links for you to just click
haha
for people who dont enjoy copy and paste
all the links for you to just click
haha
# 35
Posted:
Jun 10 2006, 12:41 AM
well, if you cant see the battle AND you really have time to copy and paste a few times,
the links are just a few comments above
the links are just a few comments above
# 34
Posted:
Jun 10 2006, 12:38 AM
egads! The second battle refuses to show itself... I will go pout in a corner now...
good luck to you both.
good luck to you both.
# 33
Posted:
Jun 9 2006, 11:48 PM
Good stuff saturday. It was a nice read with some funny parts and good use of movie reference.
Fishbot, I liked it. Great use of Void characters I just wish you had time to clean up those lines. There were parts where it was a bit hard to follow.
Fishbot, I liked it. Great use of Void characters I just wish you had time to clean up those lines. There were parts where it was a bit hard to follow.
# 32
Posted:
Jun 9 2006, 11:13 PM
Piratical , you had me at Cocktail of the damned. That shit was amazing ! I need to recover before I can give a good review
# 31
Posted:
Jun 9 2006, 10:43 PM
thanks for the comments
and...
yeah, sorry about those links...
i know it\'s a pain to copy and paste each one of them...
well, just hope they try to fix it until the end of the voting time
:\\ fuck...
and...
yeah, sorry about those links...
i know it\'s a pain to copy and paste each one of them...
well, just hope they try to fix it until the end of the voting time
:\\ fuck...
# 30
Posted:
Jun 9 2006, 10:36 PM
i don\'t see your fight showing up either, saturday @___@ but i read it from the links you provided. it was a little annoying, but i won\'t mark you down at all coz it wasn\'t yours fault. it was a cute....er....fight? XD your character is adorable. and i love how you really got into the backgrounds on the first 2-3 pages :3
fish: very entertaining! i liked the story, it was cute ^___^ woulda been really awesome to see it finished, but the sketches were easy to follow. he got pooped (3
fish: very entertaining! i liked the story, it was cute ^___^ woulda been really awesome to see it finished, but the sketches were easy to follow. he got pooped (3
# 29
Posted:
Jun 9 2006, 09:20 PM
Hah! That was good. Very nice.^_^
# 28
Posted:
Jun 9 2006, 09:12 PM
for anyone who is interested...
here are the links to the pages
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/1838/pgina17ao.jpg
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/8656/pgina25li.jpg
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/9458/pgina35bp.jpg
http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/9984/pgina44hg.jpg
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/500/pgina58lb.jpg
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/6425/pgina69gz.jpg
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/6947/pgina72hk.jpg
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/6770/pgina82fg.jpg
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/4504/pgina96mu.jpg
yeah, not the best way but... shit, that\'s life
here are the links to the pages
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/1838/pgina17ao.jpg
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/8656/pgina25li.jpg
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/9458/pgina35bp.jpg
http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/9984/pgina44hg.jpg
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/500/pgina58lb.jpg
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/6425/pgina69gz.jpg
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/6947/pgina72hk.jpg
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/6770/pgina82fg.jpg
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/4504/pgina96mu.jpg
yeah, not the best way but... shit, that\'s life
# 27
Posted:
Jun 9 2006, 08:54 PM
not even I can see MY pages...
man, that\'s kinda depressing
:X
man, that\'s kinda depressing
:X
# 26
Posted:
Jun 9 2006, 08:39 PM
is there anything i can do to help you guys?
maybe i could put the links?
o.o or something like that
maybe i could put the links?
o.o or something like that
# 25
Posted:
Jun 9 2006, 08:21 PM
i cant see joes either
# 24
Posted:
Jun 9 2006, 08:17 PM
Pye is so getting a monocle one of these days.
Very entertaining entries from both of you. Sorry you couldn\'t finish, fish, but it still turned out very cool.
Saturday, I\'m very impressed with your art, the style is unique, but when it shines it really comes out well. That said, I\'d like to see your coloring be more consistent, as it bounced around from flats to cel-shaded quite a bit.
Can\'t wait to see more from both of you!
Very entertaining entries from both of you. Sorry you couldn\'t finish, fish, but it still turned out very cool.
Saturday, I\'m very impressed with your art, the style is unique, but when it shines it really comes out well. That said, I\'d like to see your coloring be more consistent, as it bounced around from flats to cel-shaded quite a bit.
Can\'t wait to see more from both of you!
# 23
Posted:
Jun 9 2006, 08:10 PM
really?
o.Õ anyone else cant see something?
=X omg
o.Õ anyone else cant see something?
=X omg
# 22
Posted:
Jun 9 2006, 07:55 PM
I can\'t see your comic, Mr. Saturday.
# 21
Posted:
Jun 9 2006, 07:27 PM
XD fcking awesome man!
:\\ too bad you couldnt finish everything up...
i was really hoping to see this inked
... but MAAAN, the story is great and Joe looks really nice!
thanks for the battle
:\\ too bad you couldnt finish everything up...
i was really hoping to see this inked
... but MAAAN, the story is great and Joe looks really nice!
thanks for the battle
# 20
Posted:
Jun 6 2006, 02:47 AM
i was having both time and computer issues, but they are sent in now. the story is done but the inking isnt, so dont be too shocked or anything. blah.
# 19
Posted:
Jun 5 2006, 09:43 PM
all set
\\o
\\o
# 18
Posted:
Jun 5 2006, 10:25 AM
OMG
yes!
i cant wait
yes!
i cant wait
# 17
Posted:
May 31 2006, 03:25 AM
*sigh* zombies. Just can\'t get enough.
# 16
Posted:
May 27 2006, 01:30 AM
yeah, i kinda felt the love on the air...
all the way from here
all the way from here
# 15
Posted:
May 26 2006, 03:30 PM
i hate you.
# 14
Posted:
May 26 2006, 12:47 PM
almost done!
eee!
eee!
# 13
Posted:
May 25 2006, 02:14 AM
shit, hope i can make the deadline.
# 12
Posted:
May 12 2006, 09:11 AM
omg luv in in ze air!!
# 11
Posted:
May 9 2006, 11:33 PM
Night Of The Living Dead!
# 10
Posted:
May 9 2006, 04:47 PM
Go Fish! Go Zombies! Go me using a stoopid username-pig
# 9
Posted:
May 9 2006, 02:46 PM
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# 8
Posted:
May 9 2006, 01:25 PM
mm hawt zombeh sexxxxx
awww yea
hahaha
good luck you guys
awww yea
hahaha
good luck you guys
# 7
Posted:
May 9 2006, 08:04 AM
Bow Chikka BOW WOW
# 6
Posted:
May 8 2006, 11:32 PM
Unf umf umf unf
# 5
Posted:
May 8 2006, 07:26 PM
MAKE SWEET ZOMBIE BABIES!!!!
# 4
Posted:
May 8 2006, 05:06 PM
HA HAHAAHah AHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAAHH !
Tiem for the zombie luv.
Tiem for the zombie luv.
# 3
Posted:
May 8 2006, 04:24 PM
WHO SAW THIS ONE COMING?
Good luck to the both of ye. *thumbsup*
Good luck to the both of ye. *thumbsup*
# 2
Posted:
May 8 2006, 04:08 PM
\\o/
omg, first battle!
all the emotions involved, fear, love, hate, excitement, cheese...
o.o\"
omg, first battle!
all the emotions involved, fear, love, hate, excitement, cheese...
o.o\"
# 1
Posted:
May 8 2006, 04:07 PM
match made in undead limbo?
perhaps
GOOD LUCK YOU!
perhaps
GOOD LUCK YOU!
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
4 weeks
Ended:
Jun 16th, 2006
Votes Cast:
47
Page Views:
2331
Winner:
Mr.Saturday
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In other words, you\'re the best.
Fish! I love Deadmeat, and I love the story that you told here (Kure+Ayako+Deadmeat+Joe+Pye=FTW), but I wish you had at least a finished pencil layer or something. A lot of the panels were confusing because they were unclear.
Of course, Kure punching out that wolf-thing was awesome.