Ashes vs. Rok
Critiques & Comments
# 38
Posted:
Jun 13 2006, 03:13 PM
Great battle PsychoCaptain, I hope I have time for another in the future!
# 37
Posted:
Jun 11 2006, 04:19 PM
Oh yeah, PsychoCaptain, I don\'t know if it was intentional or not, but having the flashback be colored while leaving the main stroy black and white worked nicely.
# 36
Posted:
Jun 10 2006, 03:03 PM
Pyraithe: Yeah, you\'r right. Roks mom is gettign over exposed all over the place. Why she\'s been in, oh I con\'t know... ONE whole frame before. We gotta stop using her quick! She might end upp being a part of every single comic in void if we\'re not careful...
And yes, that was irony you just read.
And just in case you didn\'t know: neither of us, me and sdsj@mac.com, had any idear about what the other ones comic was going to be about previous to posting them here.
Great comic by the way sdsj! Rok looks good and i like how we both used Roks mom to start of the battle. Also i like the creepy dark feling in your comic. I tried to make mine a little scary too but I\'m not sure i made it^^
And yes, that was irony you just read.
And just in case you didn\'t know: neither of us, me and sdsj@mac.com, had any idear about what the other ones comic was going to be about previous to posting them here.
Great comic by the way sdsj! Rok looks good and i like how we both used Roks mom to start of the battle. Also i like the creepy dark feling in your comic. I tried to make mine a little scary too but I\'m not sure i made it^^
# 35
Posted:
Jun 10 2006, 06:30 AM
sdsj: nice battle story was ok but the entertainment was just right, i dont know either character so it was all confusing lol
Psycho Captain: for black an white that was pretty damn good, i love the cartoony way it looks but the story was weird for me cause i dont know either one of you lol but it was very entertaining at the same time
i voted almost the same but i forget who i gave the lesser score to ^_^
Psycho Captain: for black an white that was pretty damn good, i love the cartoony way it looks but the story was weird for me cause i dont know either one of you lol but it was very entertaining at the same time
i voted almost the same but i forget who i gave the lesser score to ^_^
# 34
Posted:
Jun 9 2006, 04:07 AM
I personally believe Rok did the better job here. While both were of course fantastic (didn\'t expect less), Rok just manages to squeeze in some of his own background while he\'s at it. That, and I love the little trick our favourite Devil Child uses at the end.
# 33
Posted:
Jun 8 2006, 02:53 AM
Battle of the inky black things!!! Dun dun dun!
# 32
Posted:
Jun 8 2006, 02:52 AM
I love that third page captain. Great pacing. the other pages were good as well. I liked this fight better than your zaffeus fight.
# 31
Posted:
Jun 7 2006, 09:46 PM
sdsj: You have some great artwork going on here, the story though seems somehow decent.
Psycho: Your art is also good, but your story here is more appealing in this battle and got me hooked into it. You win my votes.
Psycho: Your art is also good, but your story here is more appealing in this battle and got me hooked into it. You win my votes.
# 30
Posted:
Jun 7 2006, 01:29 AM
This is some awesome shit from the two of you. SDSJ, stellar first production; your lineart works really well. My biggest criticisms are that you had these really weird action poses that seemed stiff and awkward, and your story was kinda weak at times (especially the ending).
PsychoCaptain, Rok looks about as awesome as ever. My one complaint: his characteristic humor was just not there. I know this was meant to be a darker entry with the flashback as the centerpiece, but still, it felt kinda strange. My best advice is keep running with this backstory and flesh it out as evenly possible.
PsychoCaptain, Rok looks about as awesome as ever. My one complaint: his characteristic humor was just not there. I know this was meant to be a darker entry with the flashback as the centerpiece, but still, it felt kinda strange. My best advice is keep running with this backstory and flesh it out as evenly possible.
# 29
Posted:
Jun 5 2006, 09:42 PM
Man, reading this I wish you two had collab\'ed a lot more. There\'s something really juicy starting here with these entries, and I think you two showed a good respect for each other\'s characters and their unique traits in addition to their similarities. The art from both sides was also pretty good, and easy to follow. I wanna see this taken further, but all in all, I was fairly impressed. Good luck you two.
# 28
Posted:
Jun 5 2006, 04:44 PM
woah, i don\'t think i\'ve seen two awesome fights at one time in a LONG time. i mean, these were both amazing!
great job both of you, i relaly enjoyed it from both halves. neither of you got below a B from me......i can\'t wait to see more fights from you guys in the future.
great job both of you, i relaly enjoyed it from both halves. neither of you got below a B from me......i can\'t wait to see more fights from you guys in the future.
# 27
Posted:
Jun 5 2006, 10:23 AM
haha
i love how rok shows up in a batman-adam west shirt.
tat rules
awsome though the both of you
i love how rok shows up in a batman-adam west shirt.
tat rules
awsome though the both of you
# 26
Posted:
Jun 5 2006, 07:16 AM
Both were really good.
I finaly got to see more of Roks mum, in both comics <3
I finaly got to see more of Roks mum, in both comics <3
# 25
Posted:
Jun 5 2006, 02:43 AM
WOW PsychoCaptain! Great job! You were fantaststic! Thanks for the great fight. I particularly love page 2 it was very well put together and had great flow! It was more action packed than pack full of action! Thanks again and great work! I love your style.
# 24
Posted:
Jun 5 2006, 12:17 AM
Pretty good show from both of you. o: SDSJ, I liked your lines- same for you PsychoCaptain, though I thought both of your battles were slightly lacking entertainment wise, they were still good.
# 23
Posted:
Jun 3 2006, 02:58 PM
Alright, finally uploaded! I need to learn how to work faster or something. Hope you all have good crits to give!
# 22
Posted:
Jun 3 2006, 12:56 PM
I\'m almost done! just another hour or so! (I\'m actually kinda unhappy with my script) but I should be done on time! Cant wait to read yours!
# 21
Posted:
Jun 2 2006, 08:15 PM
Uploaded!
Whew, didn\'t think I would make it in time a couple of days ago...
Can\'t wait to read your part sdsj!
Whew, didn\'t think I would make it in time a couple of days ago...
Can\'t wait to read your part sdsj!
# 20
Posted:
May 24 2006, 05:11 PM
ohhh i cant wait!!
my character that i\'ll be submitting is simular to the both of yours also
cept he\'s very large, and is grey.And hes not a demon.
Hes a synthetic space blob...but yea we\'ll not go into that
i cant wait
<b>woohoo!!</b>
my character that i\'ll be submitting is simular to the both of yours also
cept he\'s very large, and is grey.And hes not a demon.
Hes a synthetic space blob...but yea we\'ll not go into that
i cant wait
<b>woohoo!!</b>
# 19
Posted:
May 22 2006, 02:13 PM
Dude! Awesuma! Its like a death match, only the only people who wont be dying are the combatants! (Extras be doomed!)
*swig*
*swig*
# 18
Posted:
May 21 2006, 07:02 PM
If that would happen Void would surely be doomed X)
Imagine hundreds of smal baby shadows running around cutting peoples legs off with therir claws... scarry^^
Imagine hundreds of smal baby shadows running around cutting peoples legs off with therir claws... scarry^^
# 17
Posted:
May 21 2006, 03:41 AM
oh wow. they\'re like the same?
ahaha. they\'ll make black babies. ahhahahaha!
ahaha. they\'ll make black babies. ahhahahaha!
# 16
Posted:
May 18 2006, 05:09 PM
hmm, sounds pervy to, Rok\'s like 10
# 15
Posted:
May 18 2006, 06:47 AM
These two should get together and make beautiful, beautiful little black demon children. Holy shit, that sounds kinda racist.
# 14
Posted:
May 16 2006, 03:35 PM
Something told this would happen
# 13
Posted:
May 16 2006, 02:53 PM
lol
# 12
Posted:
May 16 2006, 05:23 AM
I just have to agree with everyone else about the headshots. XD
# 11
Posted:
May 15 2006, 12:19 PM
The headshots.......oh wow.........just.......wow......
# 10
Posted:
May 15 2006, 12:36 AM
whoa unexpected fight i bet it will in a nice peacful event of happy
# 9
Posted:
May 14 2006, 09:20 PM
OH man, what if they TAG BATTLE ?
# 8
Posted:
May 14 2006, 10:04 AM
hey, finaly it\'s official. i\'ve longed for this day.
Those headshots, thats just gravy X)
Those headshots, thats just gravy X)
# 7
Posted:
May 14 2006, 05:27 AM
Those headshots...LOL. XD God, that made me confused for a moment.
Good luck to you both!
Good luck to you both!
# 6
Posted:
May 14 2006, 03:18 AM
BWA HA HA HA HA HA HA HAAA!
# 5
Posted:
May 14 2006, 01:42 AM
Whoo, lookin forward to this
# 4
Posted:
May 13 2006, 09:11 PM
I\'m cheering for the black one with the creepy eyes
# 3
Posted:
May 13 2006, 08:34 PM
ah Psychocaptain, did i ever tell you you rock my world? XD
# 2
Posted:
May 13 2006, 07:53 PM
HAHA I LOVE YOUR HEADSHOTS XD
# 1
Posted:
May 13 2006, 05:59 PM
Bet you didn\'t see this coming^^
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
3 weeks
Ended:
Jun 12th, 2006
Votes Cast:
79
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1785
Winner:
PsychoCaptain
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A rematch is definitely something we should do sometime. This one was lots of fun!