Dragon - On a personal opinion, Mal looks really young in your comic. Practice drawing old people (50-60), then middle-aged people (30-40) and work age lines into the faces of older characters. That aside, it was a pretty decent battle, albeit unfinished. Shorten your stories, and focus on just a few pages for them. Also, I recommend going to blambot or dafont and getting some better fonts. Comic-Sans is not your friend.

Jake - Firstly, I think you should lay off of colors for a bit. Practice your lines, and focus more on lighting and how it works. Maybe it\'s just the medium you used (it looks like crayon, but I suppose it\'s probably colored pencil?), but it\'s hard to see definite light sources. Now, for the bigger thing. Work your figures, really. I think the quality of your comics whould go up a great deal if you did some life figure studies and got off the whole semi-anime style you have. Study up and forge your own style.

Best of luck to the both of you.

I Like them both. Man, this is gonna be a tough one. I can\'t wait to see who will win!

yea ill definitely finish it and add a few story pages for myself in a BB, i jus gotta get my speed up to where i want it art wise.

Heh, I liked how Borris had the same thing on his mind in both of our fights: stealing! Its too bad you couldnt finish though, I\'d like to see the rest, and I liked where it was going!

BBJ That battle rocked, i especially liked the the fight scenes after borris sensed his body heat, Nice work man, i am totally getting owned on this one.

Hey! I blame school for everything, so bleh!

*bites Jake* You blame school?! You should\'ve focused instead of doing all that stuff for the Void Fighter 100. Must I get out the poking stick? Must I get Sal to throw the chairs at you? Do I need Dane to humuliate you with words? ~.~

Don\'t blame school for yer mistakes. After all. I was right there while you were coloring. *poke*

Anyway, much luff to you & luck to both of you. ^.^

lol i understand that! maybe i shoulda took the extension as well, than i coulda done more than my four.

*Whew* Uploaded! Sorry you had to wait an extra week Jira, but I bit off more than I could chew...but\'s it\'s finished! Id like to thank Wei for the extension, and I\'d like to thank school and work for making this all the more impossible to have done! Thanks everyone! *swig, -then- thud*

let\'s get OWHN

Jake has purchased an extension...Jira still expected to submit on time

well lookin at my battle i toned it down from the original 10 i had planned to 4. Ill continue the rest later BBJ but looking at what i had planned i realise that im not quite good enough to pull it off effectively. After this battle im probably gonna take a month or so level up time. Sorry if this dissappoints anyone TT_TT

A ninja vs a pirate? How delightfully absurd.

You guys should trade hats.

Robots eh? We\'ll see about that...

Heh heh, I was itchin for a battle, let\'s make it a good one BFD! *Swig*

Woot, pirates and ninjas.

You should both know robots are superior.

O yea, thanks for acceptin BBJ, hehe i always wondered what a pirate vs ninja battle would look like.