Jira vs. Mize

Jira vs. Mize

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by Mamoru

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Icon for Mize56.5%
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full range34
22 comments
# 32   Posted: Mar 15 2006, 05:52 PM
anyways i give u 5 thunmbs up......... wait aminute .....1....2. oh i only got 2 sorry

full range34
22 comments
# 31   Posted: Mar 15 2006, 05:51 PM
have u ever considered fighting crazysamuri?

full range34
22 comments
# 30   Posted: Mar 15 2006, 05:51 PM
hey mize ur artwork is tight u should test it on someone tough

Psychotic_Children
1 comment
# 29   Posted: Feb 22 2006, 02:28 AM
wow! i can honestly say im impressed by both stories ^_^

Jira: wonderful story and over all concept
Mize: brilliant colors and excellent character designs


batosai6
31 comments
# 28   Posted: Feb 19 2006, 04:27 AM
awesome as hell... i\'ll start off by sying that jira\'s fight was excellent and well put together. i liked the fight scenes the best, but......

mize\'s was freakin incredible, omg, it looked almost professional. every thing was perfect and the amount of story that was in there was also incredible. the only problem i had was that the grammar was bad. there were three captions that didnt make since because you didnt prof-read. other than that it was freakin awesome.

Bizznezz
2 comments
# 27   Posted: Feb 16 2006, 11:19 AM
Sweet!

We get a bit of Mize\'s history plus a cool battle. I can\'t wait to see what\'s gonna happen next. Yay! Mize and Aize finally meet! XD

zaffe
Artist
30 comments
# 26   Posted: Feb 16 2006, 10:19 AM
Great work both of ya!
dunno what to say that haven\'t already been said!

I enjoyed reading both of them
keep it up!

Jay
109 comments
# 25   Posted: Feb 16 2006, 08:10 AM
both awsome entries.

Jira: \"Don\'t hurt me.\" That\'s what I thought on the last panel of pg 4. Mize looked so helpless like a lost puppy or somethin\'. I felt so sorry for \'em. lol. For your first battle I liked it.You show a grasp and knowledge of anatomy that I hope to get one day.

Mize: Damn...Jira got pwned. And that clearing the room of smoke with one swing of the sword was pretty cool idea. He\'s such a show off though did he really need to toss up his sword like that? But I guess it works if he wanted to show that Ninja is nothing but dirt which gave him the time to do that. God has heard the Angel\'s prayer. I\'m gonna remember that one. Good shit.

Viperchief
Artist
210 comments
# 24   Posted: Feb 16 2006, 06:02 AM
Really enjoying the little story arc you got goin on, psyched that Mech is apart of it.  Think I\'ll do a BB after BR regarding alot of this.  Solid work as always man.  That\'s one hot Ayako too.

Black-good first showing, try to clean up that style a bit and you\'ll be set.  Mamoru\'s a tough opponent but I think you held your own.  Keep it up.

Kotori Ky
Artist
216 comments
# 23   Posted: Feb 16 2006, 12:00 AM
Simply amazing, Mize. I was really impressed with your storyline progression! You do rush a bit at the end, but the sheer amount of storyline you\'re working with really makes that up to me, at least. Your coloring and styles also just make me happy to read. Kudos.

Jira, nice job here. I agree with others about the emptiness of the first page. The colors helped a lot but it could be a little more clear. I look forward to your next battles and where you take things.

Monday
Artist
964 comments
# 22   Posted: Feb 15 2006, 11:07 PM
Gaahhh Mize your story is excellent ! I also love the aesthetic touches you\'ve made and gawww the pacing. I can\'t wait to cross paths with you one day. Meanwhilst I\'ll just have to thank you for getting me so pumped to work on my next battle. See ya on the battle field :D

And Jira, You put up a good first bout ! Your coloring is bass and I can see potential in your lines. But man mize got you beat on quality AND quantity so I\'ll be giving him the edge for this one. You still got a good score however. Good job :D

zombi
Artist
334 comments
# 21   Posted: Feb 15 2006, 10:02 PM
black, not bad man, just work a bit on refining your style. it a bit rough, but dont worry, great first showing
mize, great stuff, ur comics start of awesome, but then i feel they get a bit rushed towards the end, and are not as polished
i love the way your draw women

BronxArtist
Artist
51 comments
# 20   Posted: Feb 15 2006, 09:02 PM
Great entries from both artist!

Mamoru- great piece as always.

Jira - good stuff!, but some of the dialog in the 2nd page, kinda had me confused.

Overall good fight, both of you.

Sphinx
Artist
39 comments
# 19   Posted: Feb 15 2006, 08:21 PM
\"god has heard the angels prayer...\"  i drooled over that pannel for quite a while...
Mamoru that was a solid entry , i was really inpressed with what you pulled out..

Black, that first page let you down, but it got imediatly better, the fight sequence worked really well i thought, it probably could have been longer and had some dialoge from you character but it was still a good solid entry

Sphinx

ColonelXonik
41 comments
# 18   Posted: Feb 15 2006, 07:17 PM
First comment I\'ve made here...not a bad job on both sides.

Black, your colored work isn\'t really that bad.  But that black and white first page I found jarringly empty, and your lines just didn\'t look clean enough to cut it.  Your story writing was a little better.   I tend to prefer in these fights when there\'s a little more concentration on the opponent than just him or her being an \"intruder.\"  Just try writing something a little longer next time.  Decent job; I hope to see cleaner B&W work from you.

Mamoru...I\'ve watched this site for a while now and you\'re always impressive.  I thought your story was a bit cliched, but the string of cameos had their intended effect.  Your art is still awesome, especially with those vibrant colors...where Black needs to work on art, you need to work on story some.  Good job.

ESG
Artist
87 comments
# 17   Posted: Feb 15 2006, 07:10 PM
*jaw drop*

Mamoru
Artist
95 comments
# 16   Posted: Feb 13 2006, 05:39 PM
And Uploaded! Sorry for the last page if it is rushed. But I hope everyone would enjoy it.

Im also looking forward to what you have Blackfiredragon.

Genos
32 comments
# 15   Posted: Feb 6 2006, 11:46 PM
Should be good Black, lookign foward to it.

Mamoru, use teh extsion well! (and best of luck with school)

Drifter Ronin
Artist
105 comments
# 14   Posted: Feb 6 2006, 11:24 PM
UPLOADED. Sorry for the lack of quality in the over all battle. I ended up rushing because ...well i was jus rushing.Mamoru cant wait to see you end! Hope you voidlings enjoy!

Wei Ingnan
Artist
597 comments
# 13   Posted: Feb 4 2006, 02:11 PM
Mamoru has purchased an extension......one week.....blackfiredragon is still expected to submit on time

Mamoru
Artist
95 comments
# 12   Posted: Feb 3 2006, 06:12 PM
also school is kinda getting hectic, Im gonna ask for an extension. My apologies everyone.

Mamoru
Artist
95 comments
# 11   Posted: Feb 3 2006, 06:11 PM
the cherryfox battle should be in soon. Even I am waiting for it myself.

Genos
32 comments
# 10   Posted: Feb 3 2006, 01:34 AM
Hmm, outta curoisty Mamoru, your last battle vanished.. im confused.. what happend to it?

TypoDemon
Artist
144 comments
# 9   Posted: Jan 27 2006, 09:44 PM
=D WOO!
^__^ Yet another battle to drool upon in anticipation!

Mamoru
Artist
95 comments
# 8   Posted: Jan 26 2006, 08:35 PM
Nice to see everyone looking forward for this battle.

Blackfiredragon, I just read your email and There are things that will work and things that may not, Ill hit you up with the email as soon as Im done with some homework and personal stuff.

Genos
32 comments
# 7   Posted: Jan 24 2006, 10:49 PM
This should be enteraing, looking foward to it.

Best of luck to the both of yas!

BlueBandanaJake
Artist
83 comments
# 6   Posted: Jan 14 2006, 01:20 AM
Good luck on yo first fight there Blackfiredragon (though we know you wont be needing it). We\'ve got high expectations for the both of yahs!

Jay
109 comments
# 5   Posted: Jan 13 2006, 07:22 PM
Well said Monday. We will surely feel like the excited storming clouds, spectating upon the carnage that these two will release on the battle feild.

Monday
Artist
964 comments
# 4   Posted: Jan 10 2006, 06:20 PM
red vs blue! sword vs sword! a match made in special ops heaven !  

Drifter Ronin
Artist
105 comments
# 3   Posted: Jan 10 2006, 08:36 AM
wow im finally here, thanks for acceptin mamoru,hit me up wit an email to tell me when youll be on aim.

Burake
Artist
71 comments
# 2   Posted: Jan 9 2006, 09:21 PM
Most excellent. I like both of these characters. Will be cool to see what Jira does in his 1st battle, and Mize always has something cool to submit. :) Good luck you two.

BronxArtist
Artist
51 comments
# 1   Posted: Jan 9 2006, 08:51 PM
nice... is this the 2nd apperance of Aize?

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