Somethan ta add...I do hope tha Mista White and Agent Black go head ta\' head, that rock mah hole-ridden socks!!!

NeoIcarus, yo\' funny story line was funnier than the time when my gir-....wait a second ah promised I\'d nevah speak of that again\'....forget wha I just said...it was funnah...

Ach! Never mind... Mamoru does not equal Mamour.... >_> Humph.

Monday: Good call. I just might use it in a battle or two (PM me if that\'s not cool). I won\'t bother your NPCs though.

Neo: I took a shot at making the Rainbow Bread institute thinking of where your character will fit. I figure void, being a predominantly \" future street\" setting could use something out of the ordinary like an intellectual institure.

Big thanks to everyone who left a comment. I\'ll remember all of it. And I\'m sorry for not being able to finish the coloring. I\'ll try to not let that happen again.

And to you, Monday. Wow. I knew you were going to do something good, but damn. You still blew away my expectations. Hell, you\'ve created a world I hope you\'ll allow me to somewhat steal.

I can\'t wait to see when it ends (and for round 2). Until then, keep up the good work. (As if you needed a reminder.)

Hmm, great effort from both of you guys,, Neos - your humor there was just brilliant, and really, really enjoable - Kudos!

Monday - Your style is still a bit dfficult to read, at least for me, but this one is signifcantly better than your others - at least in readablit.y loving the rules in the class, and the humor about the other histroy teacher - very good.

hmm.. now, who to vote for.... So hard to choose...

I have read both, nice battle! And Monday, now I can see what do you mean how  your story flows.

I cant really give any long crits or comments for this one, but monday won my vote by a pinch.

But you know what, Neo, I REALLY love your rendition of everything, so fucking cute HAHAhAHaha  you need to be more consistent but otherwise, I\'m looking forward for your next battles

Holy shit you guys thanks for the comments ! I\'ll take everything to mind wihtout changing too much of Blac\'s aesthetic valuuee but more for the sake of being able to express the story better and keeping it flowing.


and neooooooooo man that was to die laughing for. I thought I was gonna straight up die when I saw those colors; its a shame you didnt get to finish them though :0. Its an entertaining read and having to stare at my over drawn plot it was in fact, a breath of fresh air for me to see Black this loose. that third page just killed me (there were two holidays involved in that montage- and Black claims to have known her for only 3hours :3) and agent fuzzy just gave me some ideas Xp.

We\'ll be meeting again . but until then good luck on your future battles ! I cant wait to see where her adventures lead her next.

great fight you guys
nothing to add to what was already said, just wanna say it was a fun read
but i gotta give it to monday, his fight was like watching a tv show. very cool. though neo\'s was cute and funny, but it wasnt as involving and was kinda simplistic. art and colors were really nice and pleasing to the eye, but it could have used some polishing, which youll definitly have if you get some more battles under your belt
keep it up guys

Close battle! I love both fighters.

Danielle made me laugh, but Agent Black won me over with storyline.

Pio, don\'t listen to these people complaining about your hand-lettering. It adds tremendously to the atmosphere of the comic. Each scratched-out word is a remnant of one of Black\'s lost memories, each twisted letter a reflection of his psyche as it gets pushed to the brink. Unless you can live in Black\'s head, you cannot possibly appreciate his actions, and unless you can see his mental condition smeared across the page in front of you, you cannot live in his head.

<3

-Jesse

Well i cant say much that hasnt already been said, i really enjoyed both contrasting styles, mondays was awsome, and well done... and Neo\'s was light hearted and funny.

Neo if you can wip somthing like that out for our battle ill be stoaked

i gave it to black by a smidgen for the art, but other than that i loved this battle good work guys.

Sphinx

This battle\'s a great example of two well thought, well executed, yet very different styles of storytelling.  Monday, every time I look at your work I feel like you must be a child of the Bauhaus or something.  Your modernist use of lettering is always cool to see, and the story is cool as well.  Neo, it\'s also  cool to see how well you played with Black while still staying true to both characters, and even though you didn\'t end on a To be continued, the question stands of \"Why did Black need to kill her?\"  Hmmm...

Anywho, you guys are doing good. Monday, I\'m willing accept that some of the words you show scratched out in your writing are intentional, it\'s cool, but for any that aren\'t, remember that the computer\'s a great tool to clean that all up with too.  N\' Neo, you handled your paneling real well for this comic, but don\'t be afraid to play around a bit more with those backgrounds in the future.  Luckily, you used just the right cues to let us know where the characters were this time, and the style\'s got a nice Sunday funnies feel to it, but in some parts like the last panel things feel just a tad empty.  I remember some nifty cityscapes in your first comic, so that\'s just something to look out for down the line.

Great work you two, I look forward to seeing what you two pull out for next time.  Good luck!  

Oh man, this was surely awesome! Monday\'s flowed with coolness with his great story and style. Neoicarus\'s was damn funny, that \"fun\" montage was the best!

...but Borris Jackknife pays for nothing! *Swig*

Where to start with this!?

Pio-Great googly mooglies amigo! That was gorgeous, a bit hard to follow on the last few actual paper pages, but altogether excellent! I love it when you get into the semi-fourth wall jokes, but I can never be unhappy when you start dabbling in the occult. It always seems so classy coming from you! The only real complaint I have is that Danielle looks a bit older than 10. But other than that great work!

Dane-This came out looking great style-wise, real nice and simple, but not too simple. Excelente! Your Black is great looking, especially in the piggyback one, the conscience fish also looked damn good integrated in, which semi real animals don\'t tend to do in simple styles, so a pat on the back! My favourite line at the moment is now officially \"...especially since my old best friend got hit by a bus or something.\" with that big doofy smile. XD  Had me cracking up beyond all reason.

Great work the both of youse, can\'t wait to see who comes out on top!

hey monday! these comic of yours are nice, more spacious and easier to read! also I noted a slight of style change, not in a bad way at all! great!

I havent read them all fully so I wouldnt vote just yet, but it seeemed both of you guys has interesting stuff goin on, I\'ll check it out latah

Wow - a guy named Falco?  - Rock me Amadeus!
And a talking fish? - Take me to the river!

Cheesus Crust, Black Monday your handwriting seems so much cleaner for some reason, and that forward slant? - people may even think you\'re friendly for that.

NeoIcarus, post it notes are indeed the plot device you make them out to be.  Danielle is a messy eater.

I like your style Monday, I love the little extras in the background funny. It\'s accually very professonal.

GReat job Dane... wait who\'s Dane, I.. I mean Danielle.. no umm... Neo(the one)Icarus.. yea ... BASS! (poof)

\"For great justice!\" \"We make the burgers out of pandas!\" Great stuff guys!

Mondy: Definitely easier to follow than your previous entries, which is a plus, but I still think you should find a better way to letter your comics. Reading through scratch-outs and hyphens really breaks up the moment. Still, the story was very creative and the art was hot.

NeoIcarus: Damn funny battle, very short and sweet. I certainly wish you could have finished!

great stories both of you! Blacks was a lil confusing but thats ok still great rythm to it. And danielles was jsut effing funny. poor black. great job interpretting his character!

Oh my CRAP kiddies, that was hella fun!!

Danielle - very cute, it made me smile and I liked seeing Black in your style.  ^_^  Good stuff!

Agent Black - KUDOS dude, for submitting something that didn\'t totally mindfuck me over.  When you de-clutter your pages like you did here, its all of a sudden REALLY obvious how well you can draw.  The story was hella creative, and I liked how you ran with it, but I honestly didn\'t read all the words, and some of your action is still a little hard to follow.  Seriously though, this is the most enjoyable fight I\'ve seen from you yet.

Great job, both of you!

UPLOADED ! > > continuing stories anyone ?

waiii I\'m scanning the last pages !!!

Dammit Editing is a bitch; and I have to go to sleep >_> I hope theres still some leeway by Tommorrow (The final day of extension I wager....)

I\'m almost done I\'ll have it in by tonight.

No problemo, Monday. Do what you have to do.

Monday has purchased an extension...one week

Sorry about this Icarus; I might have to purchase an extention; nothing big, I know I\'ll finish my pages in time, but currently I am still stranded in a household that harbors no useable scanners. I get back home on the 14th but hopefully I\'ll try to get the pages in before then if I luck out.

Rock this, Monday. Onslaught our senses once again.

Can\'t wait to see this fight! Good luck to you two O_O

pio, is this just an excuse to draw a little girl drenched in blood?
haha, this shit is going to be tight anyhow. good luck to you both!

NeoIcarus how dare you put a little girl in harms way, shame on you. Don\'t forget to wash your hands with all the blood that ur gonna spill. Good luck Agent Black ur still one of my favorites. I don\'t wanna see you die easily so don\'t pull any punches...good shit.

Well, well. This should be interesting.

But how do they meet! That is the exlamitory question of the day!

Heh heh, don\'t hold back just because she\'s a little girl Monday...ofcourse, I\'m sure you didn\'t need me to tell you that! Good luck to the combatants!

Haha finally! Its peanut butter jelly time! I\'ve been waiting to see how this one plays out.

Much luck to both parties!

Thanks for the challenge. With you as my opponent, I know this is going to be awesome!

A heavily armed man vs a little girl. This is going to be a sweet fight....Or a horrific tragedy.