Itami vs. Kate
Critiques & Comments
# 8
Posted:
Jan 16 2006, 10:22 AM
good fights, both of you. leaning towards graphite for the overall art and completion of the battle. but none the less both of you did well! just to back up the previous commentor on the hands thing. you do need some work. some of the ninjas looked like old gi joe kung fu grip hands. now don\'t get me wrong.... i\'m not raggin on your art... cause i\'ll be the first to tell you... I HATE DRAWIN HANDS. but it has to be done. so just do a lil more studying... and maybe look at your own hands when drawing.... and exhaggerate what you see.. it might help. keep up the good work, both of you.
# 7
Posted:
Jan 14 2006, 12:35 PM
not bad art from either fighter. both of u REALLY need 2 work on hands, like REALLY bad. pretty entertaining tho.
# 6
Posted:
Jan 14 2006, 03:55 AM
Rikun\'s entry seemed kind of rushed/unfinnised in regard to the artwork.
Graphite Ronin, you draw pretty well, but your shading seems to nearly totally lack any pure black, which gives the images a kind of \"foggy\" look.
Graphite Ronin, you draw pretty well, but your shading seems to nearly totally lack any pure black, which gives the images a kind of \"foggy\" look.
# 5
Posted:
Jan 9 2006, 11:47 PM
Not bad, guys!
Itami - Your figures are definetly showing improvement, but try and put more effort into them if you\'re not going to do *any* kind of background work. Tighten up your pencils, ink them even. You had a month babe, c\'mon!! GIVE\'ER!
Kate - not bad buddeh, I\'m glad you stuck with a long page length in order to complete the story, but it looked pretty rushed all the way through. Your anatomy is still kinda weak in a lot of places (esp hands), but still it was a fun little romp. ^_^
Itami - Your figures are definetly showing improvement, but try and put more effort into them if you\'re not going to do *any* kind of background work. Tighten up your pencils, ink them even. You had a month babe, c\'mon!! GIVE\'ER!
Kate - not bad buddeh, I\'m glad you stuck with a long page length in order to complete the story, but it looked pretty rushed all the way through. Your anatomy is still kinda weak in a lot of places (esp hands), but still it was a fun little romp. ^_^
# 4
Posted:
Dec 17 2005, 01:57 PM
XD WOOOOOOOOOO!!!
C\'mon Ri-Kun dont fail meh now! ^^ Hehehe =D
Can\'t wait to see what you two come up with.
C\'mon Ri-Kun dont fail meh now! ^^ Hehehe =D
Can\'t wait to see what you two come up with.
# 3
Posted:
Dec 12 2005, 02:31 PM
why do I have a feeling that mize is at stake here.
# 2
Posted:
Dec 11 2005, 04:50 PM
Here\'s a dance I wouldnt mind watching! I\'m rooting for you Itami!
...wait, I\'m rooting for Kate too!
uh...Ok, well, go for a tie! Good luck!
...wait, I\'m rooting for Kate too!
uh...Ok, well, go for a tie! Good luck!
# 1
Posted:
Dec 11 2005, 12:25 AM
Alright kid, you\'ve got yourself a week\'s head start while I take care of business on Armageddon. So let\'s see some fireworks!!
Let\'s dance.
Let\'s dance.
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
4 weeks
Ended:
Jan 16th, 2006
Votes Cast:
33
Page Views:
1287
Winner:
Graphyte Ronin
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