Wow... lots of ... crazy things from both.
Road: Heh... you\'re a real comic stand up you know that? Lemme just say that I hope you\'re willing to accept a chalange from me after I fight kura (which, knowing you, you\'ll pussy out because you \"don\'t like me\"). Other than that, your line art is pretty good, but without colors it looks flat and bland, and your backgrounds still look topsy turvy, grab some loomis books and read up on perspectives biyatch! Other than that, pretty good.
Timo: Cooooolllld Blooded man, I really like the style you use for your art, reminds me of what reggie does in a way with his sharpies. Very stylistic and points for that. But it does seem to be a tad too messy in some places... you gotta fix that up maybe. Other than that, your comic appealed to me the most. My vote is for you.
Both good, but strange...
Coalar vs. KOBE
Critiques & Comments
# 13
Posted:
Sep 26 2005, 09:50 PM
# 12
Posted:
Sep 26 2005, 02:32 AM
Roadmaster gets an A+ in the top hat and monocle category.
# 11
Posted:
Sep 25 2005, 09:40 PM
And 1 million points go to Roadie for using \"Cock Burglar\" successfully.
It\'s really interesting to see the contrast of styles, like the lines and stuff. While i felt that Roadie\'s comic was very empty in some panels, Timo\'s comic was also very crowded in some of his.
Timo, your comic was... umm.. surreal lol. In a funny, good way. Although I\'m disappointed in the lack of Coalar. I think you could have used him more effectively.
Roadie, your comic was nice. I like the inclusion of the VCPD, naked Phil, the use of the word \"furvert\" and ...uh.. monkey Dumas, apparently...
I\'m gonna give this one to Roadie, based on the entertainment factor.
It\'s really interesting to see the contrast of styles, like the lines and stuff. While i felt that Roadie\'s comic was very empty in some panels, Timo\'s comic was also very crowded in some of his.
Timo, your comic was... umm.. surreal lol. In a funny, good way. Although I\'m disappointed in the lack of Coalar. I think you could have used him more effectively.
Roadie, your comic was nice. I like the inclusion of the VCPD, naked Phil, the use of the word \"furvert\" and ...uh.. monkey Dumas, apparently...
I\'m gonna give this one to Roadie, based on the entertainment factor.
# 10
Posted:
Sep 25 2005, 08:06 PM
I dunno about this one. Road\'s was definately easier to follow, but no less bizarre. Both entries were just too weird for me, and the jokes didn\'t really work for me either.
Road, you had better colors, but some major anatomy and foreshortening issues, especially panels 4 and 5 of page 3, but in other places as well.
Timo, I\'m still trying to get used to your style. I had hardly any idea what was going on the whole time I was reading your entry. I didn\'t really want to dock you for anatomy, because I\'m not sure if it\'s your style or not, but I do think it\'s something you should try to incorporate more of into your work. However, your coloring really doesn\'t work for me. It looks rushed and almost lazy, but I\'m not sure if it\'s like that because it was rushed and lazy, or if that\'s how you wanted it.
I really have no idea how my votes for this one turned out; it was too weird for me to judge.
Road, you had better colors, but some major anatomy and foreshortening issues, especially panels 4 and 5 of page 3, but in other places as well.
Timo, I\'m still trying to get used to your style. I had hardly any idea what was going on the whole time I was reading your entry. I didn\'t really want to dock you for anatomy, because I\'m not sure if it\'s your style or not, but I do think it\'s something you should try to incorporate more of into your work. However, your coloring really doesn\'t work for me. It looks rushed and almost lazy, but I\'m not sure if it\'s like that because it was rushed and lazy, or if that\'s how you wanted it.
I really have no idea how my votes for this one turned out; it was too weird for me to judge.
# 9
Posted:
Sep 24 2005, 11:50 PM
submitted with 10 minutes to spare... wow that\'s the closest I\'ve been to a deadline in... anything... Sorry for the low quality ahead of time though... I totally overestimated how much time I had
# 8
Posted:
Sep 24 2005, 09:02 PM
SHIT I THOUGHT THIS WAS DUE SUNDAY OH FUCK
# 7
Posted:
Sep 24 2005, 02:41 AM
oh my god oh my god oh my god
# 6
Posted:
Sep 7 2005, 10:18 PM
YOUR FACE WILL BE BUSY CHAT BUBBLES.
# 5
Posted:
Sep 7 2005, 03:27 AM
i expect super busy chat bubbles....
# 4
Posted:
Sep 6 2005, 08:28 PM
oh man,
MAN,
MAN,
that was COLD BLOODED.
MAN,
MAN,
that was COLD BLOODED.
# 3
Posted:
Sep 5 2005, 04:55 PM
I did not see this coming..... AND NEITHER DID YOUR MOTHERS LAST NIGHT! OH!
# 2
Posted:
Sep 3 2005, 09:44 PM
oh snap, coalar\'s back in action. Will it be another clay battle? or just clay? what does that mean? how the hell should I know?! To find out, tune in next month for the Coalar 2, the return of Coalar!!!
# 1
Posted:
Sep 3 2005, 12:59 PM
RM dude, you haven\'t battled in over a year! You probably totally suck now compared to when you just kinda used to suck. HAR, seriously though, let\'s see what you got. You too Timo, make it a good one.
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
3 weeks
Ended:
Oct 1st, 2005
Votes Cast:
24
Page Views:
1396
Winner:
Timo
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